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Compared to other similar sites I have seen this is an A1 example. Very good looking, and a strong example of what TO do.
There are a few small things I would change though (sort of nitpicking)
-- the font next to the photographs looks too blocky (bold, maybe?), I would thin it out or try a different font, something that matches the headers, perhaps.
-- the yellow background behind all your other links, I assume you're focusing on cashcrate, but the others tend to blend in and just look like ads to me
-- repeating "nothing to lose" near the end of the page makes me hesitant, I'm familiar with the programs you're linking to, but I'd be worried about that phraseology being repeated if I were not
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