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Hey guys, I'm looking for a critique on this new site I made for Smarty Smart Sticks.
Old 01-29-2009, 10:16 PM Hey guys, I'm looking for a critique on this new site I made for Smarty Smart Sticks.
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http://www.SmartySmartSticks.com

Hey guys, I'm looking for a critique on this new site I made for Smarty Smart Sticks.

"The Sticks that make you SMART!
The Game that STICKS with YOU!

The Ultimate, Fun Learning Interactive Game where your child will learn and have fun at the same time. "

Please let me know what you think of it. All comments/critiques good or bad are appreciated.

Thanks ahead,
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Old 01-29-2009, 10:34 PM Re: Hey guys, I'm looking for a critique on this new site I made for Smarty Smart Sti
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The over all look of the site is okay. But you can use an Order Now button instead of the phrase, "To purchase Smarty Smart™ Sticks. Click Here"
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Old 01-30-2009, 02:49 PM Re: Hey guys, I'm looking for a critique on this new site I made for Smarty Smart Sti
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CUTE! The colors convey and attracts children for sure! Love it.

Aside from victoria's suggestion, I couldn't think of any to add at the moment.
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Old 01-30-2009, 06:09 PM Re: Hey guys, I'm looking for a critique on this new site I made for Smarty Smart Sti
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I think it's a 'cute' site. Something definitely geared for a kid's toy. I really like it. But there were some items that didn't show up. It's probably the ancient version browser I happen to be using right now, but it might be something to look in to.
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Old 02-01-2009, 01:03 PM Re: Hey guys, I'm looking for a critique on this new site I made for Smarty Smart Sti
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smarty smart sticks ... looks like some narcotic ... sory

About site. I do not know why but your site, I do not like it as it irritates my opinion, most likely the case in the design or the topic. Add more news, so the beam will be better little information on the site at least at the start page.
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Old 02-01-2009, 03:57 PM Re: Hey guys, I'm looking for a critique on this new site I made for Smarty Smart Sti
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NICE PAGE! its making me happy so I have no doubt children will not like it haha! keep up the good work
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Old 02-04-2009, 02:41 PM Re: Hey guys, I'm looking for a critique on this new site I made for Smarty Smart Sti
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design looks good...kids will really like it
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