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Old 03-22-2009, 03:05 PM New Identity!
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Here is my new corporate identity, aimed towards small businesses that are local to me, feedback is much appreciated!

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Old 03-22-2009, 07:26 PM Re: New Identity!
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very nice site. only thing i feel is missing is a portfolio page. i know you have some of your work displayed in your "about" page, but it should have it's own section.
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Old 03-22-2009, 10:06 PM Re: New Identity!
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Nice design and layout. Colour is amazing.
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Old 03-22-2009, 10:16 PM Re: New Identity!
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Wow. That's a very nice template! Good work man!

One thing I noticed is that the content under the "A Natural Web Solution" will be better if it is in an HTML format rather than an image.
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Old 03-23-2009, 02:34 AM Re: New Identity!
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I love the hover effect! As mentioned above, you should make your description as HTML. It will help you out with SEO and such. I'm not a fan of the texture/color in the footer. Maybe make it more like the top navigation?
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Old 03-23-2009, 04:20 AM Re: New Identity!
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Very clean looking design . The colors you chose go nicely with each other.
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Old 03-23-2009, 10:47 AM Re: New Identity!
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Thanks for the comments! I've made a few more alterations from the feedback I've had here and another forum. I also plan on adding some subtle jQuery animations here and there, I just haven't got around to it yet!

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very nice site. only thing i feel is missing is a portfolio page. i know you have some of your work displayed in your "about" page, but it should have it's own section.
I don't currently have enough completed websites to fill a portfolio. I do have work to showcase (thats in my online cv in my sig) but I think it would more 'deter' small businesses rather than attract them. So at the moment I just have the current projects in the about section

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I love the hover effect! As mentioned above, you should make your description as HTML. It will help you out with SEO and such. I'm not a fan of the texture/color in the footer. Maybe make it more like the top navigation?
All of the imagery that is used for text has the text itself embedded into the HTML and hidden with CSS, that way it still shows up on search engines and for other devices e.g. screenreaders

I suppose it will be slightly harder to maintain, but I shouldn't have to change them that much!
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Old 03-23-2009, 07:49 PM Re: New Identity!
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I love the site's bright color.. very pleasing to the eyes! Good job!
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Old 03-23-2009, 08:11 PM Re: New Identity!
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You already have some good comments on the layout/design. Now I am going to talk about your content.

From a business stand point I would take out "what a more experienced design agency may charge you" and replace it with "what other design agencies may charge you." You are a design agency. You don't need to state your inexperience, you will loose a lot of potential clients with that sentence.

On the services page, change "professional looking business cards" to "professional business cards." They are paying for them, they are professional business cards.

On the contact page, take out "informal." Let the client decide how formal the meeting is to be.
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Old 03-23-2009, 08:15 PM Re: New Identity!
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Awesome work man! I like it. Looks great. Great use of colors. I like green and brown.
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Old 03-24-2009, 07:30 AM Re: New Identity!
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You already have some good comments on the layout/design. Now I am going to talk about your content.

From a business stand point I would take out "what a more experienced design agency may charge you" and replace it with "what other design agencies may charge you." You are a design agency. You don't need to state your inexperience, you will loose a lot of potential clients with that sentence.

On the services page, change "professional looking business cards" to "professional business cards." They are paying for them, they are professional business cards.

On the contact page, take out "informal." Let the client decide how formal the meeting is to be.
Some good points! Thanks a lot
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Old 03-24-2009, 04:12 PM Re: New Identity!
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I like the brown on the bottom, it reflects nature... putting white like on the top would loose the meaning of nature and freshness. oh, and I love the little bird on the contact page for twitter, nice!
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Old 03-24-2009, 06:20 PM Re: New Identity!
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hey man id write a longre review but i like your website its fresh!
love the way the box fades in and the layout of it looks really professional
i wish you all the best!
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Old 03-26-2009, 04:35 AM Re: New Identity!
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Hi,

It is very nice site and its layout also so good
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