While your content is good, I'm not sure if I'd actually read it if you didn't ask us about your content. Like economist said, "center it and add more design to it." Make a background to the content and title. Then make a border to seperate the two. Make sure you stay true to your color scheme, at the moment I don't see one.
Look at your competitor's website... http://www.entrancesoftware.com/index.htm
I'm not saying copy it, just understand the difference. Hope this gives you some ideas. Good luck. |
