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Old 04-01-2009, 08:29 PM Streets of Net
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Dear Webmaster-Talk members,

I launched a new website called "Streets of Net".

Can you please review it?

URL: http://www.streetsofnet.com
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Old 04-01-2009, 08:52 PM Re: Streets of Net
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From the start I was pretty confused on what you site is about, I had to read all of your paragraphs to get a glimpse... I think a clear headline or tag line that sums of your service would be great and more of a direction on what you want your users to do would be great. I would also look into somewhat of a grid system layout, so your content has some structure, right now it kind of feels like a big gunk of copy. This article may help : http://www.smashingmagazine.com/2007...ased-approach/
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Old 04-01-2009, 10:35 PM Re: Streets of Net
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Also, site design isn't that attractive. I think you can do better than this. Or hire a designer to design a theme for you. Your content looks good though, but you can add up some more on your home page to give your visitors enough information that they are looking for.
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Old 04-01-2009, 11:10 PM Re: Streets of Net
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haha, interesting concept. i like how the only house currently built with a roof deck pool is taken.
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Old 04-01-2009, 11:57 PM Re: Streets of Net
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I like the site and was curiously thinking about advertising but you need something to attract people to use the site. Currently there isn't anything that makes me want to go back. This may be going out on a bit of a limb but what this would be really cool as a game (ever play the original Sim City) where people can create buildings, roads, trains, etc and maybe each of the buildings they build be sponsored by your advertisers? Just something I think would draw people to use the site, I just don't see people coming currently. Hope that helps!
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Old 04-02-2009, 04:32 AM Re: Streets of Net
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I like the site and was curiously thinking about advertising but you need something to attract people to use the site. Currently there isn't anything that makes me want to go back. This may be going out on a bit of a limb but what this would be really cool as a game (ever play the original Sim City) where people can create buildings, roads, trains, etc and maybe each of the buildings they build be sponsored by your advertisers? Just something I think would draw people to use the site, I just don't see people coming currently. Hope that helps!
Please read the answer of 5th question:
http://www.streetsofnet.com/frequent...uestion.html#5

You can also read frequently asked questions page to get more information:

Thanks for all comments.

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Old 07-12-2009, 03:24 PM Re: Streets of Net
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Sold 6 streets since April 1 2009.

The 7th street is online. There are 5 buildings available on the 7th street.
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