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Old 04-18-2009, 06:01 AM My Personal Site - Jaryth.net
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So, I've been a part of this forum for a while now, and I drift in and out, posting once and a while, asking questions, (hopefully) answering some questions, and in all have enjoyed being a part (even if its a small part) of this community.
I've asked for help for my site a few times before, but never a review... and thats why Im here now.

http://jaryth.net/

So, keep in mind it is a personal site, and as such, Im not so much asking anyone to review the content. Hows the layout? Hows the code? How are things in general? Comments/Suggestions/yelling at me for doing something stupid/critique are all more then welcome!
The way I see it, the more information the people here can provide, the better of a website I can create now, and in the future.

(3 quick notes: Im aware the color scheme changing device is broken, I broke it when I started using ModRewrite to make the URL's prettier. The background/theme of the last two sections are ment to be diffrent to distinguish them from the main site, since they are (somewhat) seperate parts. If you visit the Gallery, Im vary aware that its not valid... the work that would be involved in fixing it.... makes me fine with it not being valid XD).

(oh, and although its broken, http://jaryth.net/pages/color < thats the color scheme changing device I mentioned. I created the name on the spot just now.... lol. Still not entirly sure why it stopped working... something to do with the Cookies not liking the domain... I never looked that far into it).

So, have at it sirs and madams, and any and all information is welcome.
(more then welcome)

I thank you in advanced for your time. (as a last note, sorry if this post is not 100% gramaticaly correct... its like 5am right now).


Edit: So as it turns out... apparently the cookie works now? and the Color page is not broken? Erm..... I fixed it? XD. I have no idea....
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Old 04-18-2009, 09:05 AM Re: My Personal Site - Jaryth.net
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The navigation text font color could use some work, it's hard to see on that background image.
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Old 04-18-2009, 11:44 AM Re: My Personal Site - Jaryth.net
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Agree with dWhite. Maybe you could add some interaction too when you hover over it.

The color thing is cool though, good job
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Old 04-18-2009, 12:32 PM Re: My Personal Site - Jaryth.net
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first thing, font needs to be changed.

second, there is no layout to your content. you just have this box and your content is just paragraph after paragraph. it looks very boring.

third, your css styles should be a separate file so it can be cached and not loaded every time one of your pages load.
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Old 04-18-2009, 01:14 PM Re: My Personal Site - Jaryth.net
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I totally agree

But you need a header and some more things for me it look like it is unfinish, love your project Keep it up
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