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Originally Posted by Wayward
Well, you could at least make it a proper link for a start :]
Design is quite good overall. Products pages could do with a bit of an explanation as to what you mean. How much of an update is 'minor'? What's SEO? The 'satisfaction gauranteed' thing is a little cheesy.
I would also suggest you don't put a portfolio page up if you can't fill it. It's a matter of opinion but I'd say you'd be better off not having any portfolio than one that says you haven't done enough work to make one.
Sales writing isn't great, needs quite a bit of tidying up in places, some wierd and politics italics?
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The design specifications are all detailed in the contract. I have the portfolio page there now because I do obviously intend on filling it. What do you suggest I put there while I don't have much professional design under my belt?
What is wrong with the text? The italics is to define the main points and keep the text less boring.
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Originally Posted by hartofalyon
why do you have random images of keyboards, mice, color pencils, and a bluish gradient? these images do nothing to convince the viewer how good a designer you are.
your overall design doesn't look professional, rather amateurish. fonts are too big, layout is generic, and your logo is plain and way too large. if you're going to market yourself as quality w/o the high price, make sure the quality is there. if i was a potential client, i wouldn't think so based on your own site. in fact, the phrase "you get what you pay for" rings in mind. the copy on your site also really needs a lot of work. your writing doesn't sound professional at all.
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If you really think about it, the images are not random. They all deal with aspects of the internet, computers, and design. I don't see how font size would be seen as 'too large' unless you are running on a fairly low resolution... Even then I made sure it didn't appear disportionate. My logo is simplistic, that is how I wanted it; and I really don't think it is too large by any means. How does my writing not sound professional? I don't see what you are saying.
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Originally Posted by victoriaphee
No offense mate, but it reminds me of websites of the '90s
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How so?
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Originally Posted by Brian07002
Looks pretty good so far, but one *Big* mistake is you didn't put up a portfolio before you decided to put the site live. That's not a good idea imo.
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Yes, I didn't really feel great about putting up an empty portolio page, but I don't really see how I could make it a placeholder instead of how I have it right now. What did you have in mind?
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Originally Posted by medy3a
Obvious merit for me - it has Russian language  |
It doesn't have any russion language in it... 
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Originally Posted by mebarclay
Cool design you have very small content on your home page And i'm not web designer So i can't say its enough for site or not because i haven't much experience With Web designing sites but you have really good template and color combination i really like it
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Thank you for your consideration!
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Last edited by Madman340; 04-22-2009 at 02:25 AM..
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