Posts: 107
Name: Roy Dixon
Location: Iowa, same as Kirk
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I think it needs a little more punch, Jake.
How about making it look like a newspaper? I think that could be visually appealing and solve a couple of problems.
One problem I see is your ad placement. Your Google ads really interfere with the content. By setting it up like a tabloid, you could set up a section that is entirely devoted to ads. You could also keep the black and white format that way.
I would create a banner and a logo.
A photo would be nice, to lead off the content. It should be a very simple thing to come up with a photo, since you could use any one of the events of the day.
I'm sure you know that a site like this requires commitment to keep it up. If you miss even one day's update, you may lose visitors.
Finally, you'll need to be extra careful with spelling on this site. You'll be entering new text every single day, so spelling and grammar mistakes will be MUCH more likely. There are a couple of misspelled words on the May 21st entry, but I don't need to point them out, since the text may change before you read this review.
Good Luck!
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