Website Review and Suggestions

**Matt32** · 09:28 AM

Hi All,

Its been three month,we have launched Motorkwik, a car site with huge database.You can get any car realated solution here.One more attractive thing is that here you can sell your Used car.

Please flipping through the pages.Informative suggestions are most welcome.

**TWD** · 07-21-2009, 08:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Matt32

Hi All,

Its been three month,we have launched Motorkwik, a car site with huge database.You can get any car realated solution here.One more attractive thing is that here you will be able to sold your Used car.

Please flipping through the pages.Informative suggestions are most welcomed.

Here are two informative suggestions.
1. Use a spell checker. Your English is terrible.
2. Don't spam us!

**thefandango** · 07-21-2009, 08:11 AM

It is a nice site, but I cannot work out initially what country it is for until performing a search. Perhaps have country flags to click or something?

I am also confused why the posters English is appalling yet the sites is impeccable, makes me suspicious as to if this is just pulling in listings from other car sites?

**Matt32** · 07-21-2009, 09:27 AM

Hi TWD,

I am sorry for my silly mistake.Anyway what do you think about Motorkwik?

**TWD** · 10:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Matt32

Hi TWD,

I am sorry for my silly mistake.Anyway what do you think about Motorkwik?

Sorry I couldnt figure out if you genuinely wanted a review or not.

A number of things I dont like:

Font is too small. I have a headache now

I don't understand your logo. I thought you were selling tangerines at first.

As "thefandango" rightly says, it is NOT obvious which geographic market you are operating in.

The order of your tags in your <head> is all wrong. You shouldnt have JavaScript links before CSS links.
And the Meta Tags (by convention if nothing else) should come after the <title>

Your Contact Us form is tragically bad. I dont have time to go into all the reasons why.

I've never seen anyone try to squeeze a blog teaser post into a
postage stamp before. Thats a novel approach.

The "show cars" icon says 128619 cars.
But in nice big bold red letters you say 128769 cars available.
So which is it? Or is that just a random number?
If I log back in two weeks from now will those numbers be different?

Reams of inline junkyard JavaScript. (Two words for you J, Query

)

Inappropriate use of tables.

And of course:
Errors found while checking this document as XHTML 1.0 Strict!

Result: 257 Errors, 75 warning(s)

**S_A_W** · 07-21-2009, 01:39 PM

Overall look and feel is nice, there are a couple of things to fix. Get rid of all that extra grey area at the bottom under quick links and the images took a few seconds to load so perhaps you could optimize them better.

**Matt32** · 01:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TWD

Sorry I couldnt figure out if you genuinely wanted a review or not.

A number of things I dont like:

Font is too small. I have a headache now

I don't understand your logo. I thought you were selling tangerines at first.

As "thefandango" rightly says, it is NOT obvious which geographic market you are operating in.

The order of your tags in your <head> is all wrong. You shouldnt have JavaScript links before CSS links.
And the Meta Tags (by convention if nothing else) should come after the <title>

Your Contact Us form is tragically bad. I dont have time to go into all the reasons why.

I've never seen anyone try to squeeze a blog teaser post into a
postage stamp before. Thats a novel approach.

The "show cars" icon says 128619 cars.
But in nice big bold red letters you say 128769 cars available.
So which is it? Or is that just a random number?
If I log back in two weeks from now will those numbers be different?

Reams of inline junkyard JavaScript. (Two words for you J, Query

)

Inappropriate use of tables.

And of course:
Errors found while checking this document as XHTML 1.0 Strict!

Result: 257 Errors, 75 warning(s)

I think you are a good reviewer with enough knowledge.

I can't understand the XHTML 1.0 errors.

Motorkwik,Established in 2009, the business is situated in Penarth.
The firm aims to supply businesses to professional car dealers and has on-site facilities. The expert staff help clients get back on the road. The service is designed to promote your business every time.

Please suggest some good way so that i can make it better..please.