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I made many changes on limograbber.com
Old 07-26-2009, 10:49 AM I made many changes on limograbber.com
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Hi months ago I requested your help o review my site and you gave me many feedback to improve my site.
I am here again to get your feedback.
Please review my site.

Thank you

http://www.limograbber.com
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Old 07-26-2009, 11:02 AM Re: I made many changes on limograbber.com
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Looks pretty good to me.

A couple of things though.
I don't like the header graphic at all.

1) Don' use GIF format, use PNG. Its much smoother and crisper.
2) It looks kind of bland. Needs a real logo icon or something that
connects with the concept of Limos PLUS a marketing tag line
that clarifies what you do.
3) I dont like the red background or the red link text for that matter.
Red communicates "danger" so it should rarely be used for
sites like this.

Also:
4) How about a favicon?
5) I guess you know that your contact form is a bit shabby.
You need to set up a proper contact form to look professional.

I assume English is not your first language. You need to get
a native speaker to check your content.
For example, can you spot the FIVE MISTAKES in just this one sentence
on your home page?

Quote:
We relased our new web site.
As we promised; we are hardly working on our web site to give you more bussiness opportunities.
Good luck!

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Old 07-28-2009, 12:03 AM Re: I made many changes on limograbber.com
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Appearance - 9.5/10
I really like the way your site looks. The way you have laid everything out is very professional. The font sizes are all perfect and easily readable . I also like the little shade you have in the background to make it as if your site is popping up! The only thing I didn't like was the logo. It looked generic. Aside from that though, great job!

Functionality - 10/10
Navigation is really simple. You've separated all of the services by states, making it real easy to browse through. The search box feature is a nice touch too in case somebody knows the name of the service! Load times were also very fast!


Overall - 9.5/10
The purpose of the site is clear - search for limo services near you! The design matches the type of site it is - sleek, simple, and easy. The only thing I would say here is to make sure all of the limo services have some sort of unique thumbnail instead of the generic missing thimbnail. Aside from that and the logo I mentioned above, all looks great! Very nice!
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Old 07-28-2009, 12:18 AM Re: I made many changes on limograbber.com
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Very nice simple looking site here. The only suggestion I have is to make the logo a bit more flashier. Right now it has somewhat of a generic look.
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Old 07-28-2009, 04:55 AM Re: I made many changes on limograbber.com
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1) Don' use GIF format, use PNG. Its much smoother and crisper.
2) It looks kind of bland. Needs a real logo icon or something that
connects with the concept of Limos PLUS a marketing tag line
that clarifies what you do.
3) I dont like the red background or the red link text for that matter.
Red communicates "danger" so it should rarely be used for
sites like this.
Same thing in my mind, you should change your logo header with a classy and a flashier one.

Overall your site is good to go.
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Old 07-28-2009, 05:00 AM Re: I made many changes on limograbber.com
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Looks like a very useful site - if I ever visit the States with a few thousand bucks..
Yes the main logo is very poor, its just a few words and they are jaggedy.
What about a nice pic of a s t r e t c h e d limo ?
I would ditch that banner ad in the top middle about some death wargame. That sort of ad or any non limo ads do not belong in a serious website such as yours.
Yes fix that bad English too.
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Old 08-05-2009, 02:46 PM Re: I made many changes on limograbber.com
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You guys are best!!

Thank you so much your recommendations.
I tried to make your suggestions.
You may check it..

www.limograbber.com

Thank you again;
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Old 08-05-2009, 08:06 PM Re: I made many changes on limograbber.com
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TWD is right. Definitely get the spelling and grammar checked. This often times is a red flag for visitors. Under news it should be "We released our new website" and "we are working hard on our website" the way you have it now "we are hardly working on our website" implies you're not working on it very much. Site looks nice and simple.

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Old 08-05-2009, 08:37 PM Re: I made many changes on limograbber.com
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Now that is a spot on ... I like the improvement of the site that you made the simplicity is really good. the navigation is outstanding over all great job and keep it up.
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