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Old 07-31-2009, 02:13 AM free services site to tear apart
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Ok I have been working my but off on this site the seo is close to perfect and the code is clean but how does it look and what other free services can I add to make it better.
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Old 07-31-2009, 02:42 AM Re: free services site to tear apart
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Ok I have been working my but off on this site the seo is close to perfect and the code is clean but how does it look and what other free services can I add to make it better.
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I'm sorry to have to tell you this but you've got a lot more work to do.

Firstly you say the "seo is close to perfect"
How do you arrive at that statement?

Lets say for argument sake that it does rank well.
Your title tag is such a mixed bag of random spammy words
I doubt many people are going to click on it.

And I dont understand how you decide that the code is clean.
Clean to (most professional designers) would mean CSS based code that
passes the W3C validations test. Yours is neither.

And why are you using HTML4 Transitional DOCTYPE?
XHTML1.0 Strict please, (or HTML5 if you don't mind getting
into fights with people on this forum).

Concerning the site itself, there appears to be no organization of content.
No clear focus.
The fonts are all wrong.
The color scheme bland and unappealing.

I almost choked on my gum when I saw your Twitter
box at the bottom. Do you honestly expect people
to type their Twitter Password and Twitter Account name
into some random stranger's website?

There are spelling and grammar errors.

The logo looks very unprofessional.
Why did you make it in GIF format?
You should always use PNG for illustrations.

Favicon has no relationship to the rest of your site.

"View your local weather".
Hmmm . Are you a weather broadcasting site

I'll give you 1 bonus point for at least putting
a W3C badge on your page. A lot of designers
apparently think W3C is a wrestling organization.

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Old 07-31-2009, 04:56 AM Re: free services site to tear apart
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I respect your opinion but what make you an expert on color choice . and the site does pass w3c without the rss feeds the errors are all in the links in the feed .
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Old 07-31-2009, 05:15 AM Re: free services site to tear apart
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The design looks Quite old,
header looks very bad i think noisy,
Not good meta Description Just Tags show Up high,
and You added tweet button that cool
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Old 07-31-2009, 02:53 PM Re: free services site to tear apart
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The header was made by a friend we are still looking at diff ones. I put on a new one today that is a .png and cleaner maybe it will look better.
Based on the comments I will look at the description tag But I am not sure what to use that tell what the site is about. maybe ultimate collection of free stuff?
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Old 08-13-2009, 01:49 PM Re: free services site to tear apart
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Thanks for the input every body. I Have made several changes hope it looks better now
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Old 08-13-2009, 03:00 PM Re: free services site to tear apart
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I think it looks much better.
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