It looks to me that you are trying too hard with the SEO and not enough about building a site that visitors will actually get value from and enjoy interacting with.
I don't like the red text.
A single column layout without any images looks quite
frankly...wierd. 
You could at least add some padding or margins to create some
gutter. And you really need a sidebar to add a bit more interest and better
organization to the site.
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