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Old 08-04-2009, 04:30 AM Need your review please
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Hello all,

Recently I've built a site that deals with business phone cards, and I wanted you to tell me what you think about it;
This is not my site(not ready yet), but I wanted you to review this and tell me what you think about this design so I will be able to compare and change my own design according to your review.

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Old 08-04-2009, 05:18 AM Re: Need your review please
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It's ugly. The blue gradient bar doesn't make any sense. The content should have a bigger margin, the text is placed against the border. The blue topbar isn't correctly aligned at the right.
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Old 08-04-2009, 06:00 AM Re: Need your review please
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You need to get rid of the logo for a start.
5 different colors - yeck!

The purple gradient things dont look too good either.

And it needs to be center aligned.

The graphics look pretty rough.
You should try to get cleaner ones.
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Old 08-04-2009, 10:30 AM Re: Need your review please
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The menu bar doesnt look that good, and there's several different types of fonts all over the page which doesnt give it such a clean look, the page needs to fill the window and things wont look so compressed, also cannot see the wording under the site title in the banner, use a darker color for this.
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Old 08-04-2009, 02:11 PM Re: Need your review please
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Overall: 5.5, as a former calling card user, is this still the cheapest alternative? What about prepaid cell phones?

Appearance (I’m using IE6 so this could be different): The logo, menu, and content appear to be off slightly. They don’t line up exactly. The sections in the content alternate between a solid background and transparent which makes the background look bad. There isn’t a consistent appearance between all the pages accessed from the menu.

Functionality: navigation and links work, fast load time. One thing I noticed is that you can’t get back to the original page you sent us to if you use the menus. This page: http://www.pinspeedy.com/Business-Phone-Cards.html isn’t the home page and it isn’t in the menu navigation.

Overall & Content: Other than the visual problems, I think the content is very thorough.

Technical: Various typographical and grammatical errors.
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Old 08-05-2009, 10:30 PM Re: Need your review please
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Center the page, put your top logo in a table as it is spilling over, add a tag line to your title, srink the bottom text and move your about us menu to the bottom line and add a copy disclamer...cheers
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Old 08-05-2009, 10:38 PM Re: Need your review please
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  1. center the page
  2. change the logo, possibly the header altogether.
  3. get rid of the blue gradient
Other than that, just try tidying everything up and making it "fit" better.
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Old 08-05-2009, 11:41 PM Re: Need your review please
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I think the website would look much better centered instead of left aligned like it is now. Also, your text is aligned to the left to much its running into your table lines. You will need to indent the text maybe 4px or something like that, you will have to play with it. But currently its right up against the line and it makes the website look off.

I also think you need a bigger header. Currently your headers very small and is easily overlooked (I did it). Best of luck to you and your website.
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Old 08-09-2009, 03:45 PM Re: Need your review please
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Not a bad website. Just work on the issues raised by all the respondents and you will have a good site. You must ensure that all your links are in place to re-direct a visitor back to the main site.
Good luck with your project.
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Old 08-09-2009, 03:49 PM Re: Need your review please
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well not bad,but the general layout need more work,anyway good luck
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