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Old 08-04-2009, 02:46 PM Please, review girlsgames34.com
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Girlsgames34.com - Free dress up games is an entertaining website for everyone especially for girls and who are deeply interested in fashion and dress up games...

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Old 08-04-2009, 04:36 PM Re: Please, review girlsgames34.com
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Bright colours but I think this will appeal to the younger market I guess you are targeting - Neat feature is how the width of your games matches the width of the graphical google ads. I did a games site adsense cutomisation for someone and you got it right first time - on games sites go for adsense graphic ads only and not text ads. CTR is far better for graphic ads on this type of site - and I should know my stuff (See signature)
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Old 08-04-2009, 04:43 PM Re: Please, review girlsgames34.com
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Old 08-04-2009, 07:06 PM Re: Please, review girlsgames34.com
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girl games, girls games, games for girls.

Looks like somebody has a dose of the "SEO overoptimization virus".
You know it doesnt really help you in the SEO stakes
to repeat the same words ad nauseum.
Matt Cutts did a presentation recently about exactly that point.

You would be better off to write content for humans, not for search robots.
People might enjoy using your site and link back to it in that case.

Otherwise, looks reasonable.
Some of the images are distorted because you are relying
on HTML to do the image sizing for you. Bad idea.

The code looks a bit rough too. No DOCTYPE.

And I'm not sure that the yellow, orange and pink are really complimentary
colors. You should check your color combinations with a color wheel.
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Old 08-05-2009, 02:31 AM Re: Please, review girlsgames34.com
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I edit all.. Thank you TWD
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Old 08-05-2009, 08:16 PM Re: Please, review girlsgames34.com
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TWD is right about the SEO wording, you should definitely make it more human-based text. I can't find your contact info, which is essential. What if I wanted to partner with you? How would I contact you? Other than that I think kids would get a kick out of this site, like my little cousins.

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