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Old 08-06-2009, 05:19 AM www.lajocar.com review
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Hey there,

Can you please review my site internet marketing

Any feedback will be appreciated.

Thanks
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Old 08-06-2009, 10:10 AM Re: www.lajocar.com review
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Well it passes validation.
And you remembered to add a favicon.
And I am afraid that is where my positive comment will have to end.

As a professional website designer I am holding you to
a higher standard of delivery than the average mom and pop website.

Here is whats wrong.
  • PLEEEZ get rid of the animated GIF logo. Its very 90s
  • You've used images for your main nav when you could have done the same thing with text and background CSS images. If your are going to use images, at least make them crisp anti-aliased and somewhat interesting instead of boring old Arial or whatever you chose.
  • The content lacks any clear organization or color theme.
  • "Online Internet Marketing". What other kind of Internet Marketing is there?
  • Text looks very cramped. You need more leading.
  • Your portfolio (the most compelling item on the page) is hidden down in the footer, well below the fold. Actually I cant click on them or really see the thumbnails that well so whats the point?
  • Contact Us Form -Label alignment is terrible. And using a CAPTCHA almost guarantees that a percentage of people are not going to be bothered with it.
  • You seem to enjoy repetition. You also seem to enjoy repetition. You used Welcome to... twice (actually once is one time too many but lets keep it simple for now). And thanks on your feedback form...twice. Did I mention repetition?
You need to do a lot of work.
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Old 08-06-2009, 12:41 PM Re: www.lajocar.com review
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Thanks for the feedback,

I will work on the site further and implement some of your suggestions
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Old 08-06-2009, 12:41 PM Re: www.lajocar.com review
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  • I think it's funny how a website about SEO uses images for navigation.
  • Optimisation = Optimization
  • Get rid of that animated gif logo
  • All caps and small text for headings doesn't work.. I would suggest using <H1> or <H2>, which also helps with SEO better.
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Old 08-08-2009, 07:56 PM Re: www.lajocar.com review
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It has allot of potential...maybe change that main graphic of the women to something relevant to each page to mix it up a little. I agree about the animated gif...gotta go...also the padding for the welcome message is too far left...needs to be brought in about 3 pixels....cheers
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Old 08-08-2009, 08:34 PM Re: www.lajocar.com review
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I like the overall design. A couple of suggestions - the heading navingation bar probably doesn't need to be so thick. I would reduce the height by half.

The titles. such as "About Us" and "Website Analysis Report" would look better if you used a different color to help each section stand out. The orange and green in the logo would look good.
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