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Old 08-06-2009, 08:47 AM Please review my website and give suggestions
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Please review my website and give suggestions on how i can monetize with targetted traffic ?

http://www.domainrule.com

Thanks in advance

Looking forward to a positive reply.

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Old 08-06-2009, 10:28 AM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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Some interesting content to be sure.
But you need to get a native English speaker to check
your spelling, grammar and phrasing.

I picked one article at random and found this:

Quote:
Recently, Google has been changed the way they look at domain names with dashes.
Can you spot the grammatical error? Mistakes like that destroy credibility.

Speaking of which, can you site any authoritative proof of that statement?
A link to some SEO research? A link to a Google Webmaster Blog article? A link to
a Matt Cutts video? When you can do any of those things I will take
your advice more seriously.

Design wise, I have seen much better WordPress CMS sites.
Red text is a mistake.
And the faaaast rotating banner ad is annoying as hell.
I was mildly interesting in reading what the text says was but my eyes
are not that fast.
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Old 08-06-2009, 12:23 PM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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Thanks for the great feedback.

Changed the slideshow timing .

Will have a look at all the articles once more [ for the english ].

About the article, i read it in another forum thats why i had posted that as well.

Will have a look at the red colour as well.

What i wanted to ask is there any other way i could monetize my website ?


Looking for more reviews.

Thanks again,

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Old 08-08-2009, 05:04 PM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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Wow Awesome site, only thing I would sugest is centering the website, cant really pic much faults really do like the site WELL DONE
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Old 08-09-2009, 01:41 AM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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Nice site, make sure all the generic images on the front page are replaced by actual images.
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Old 08-09-2009, 06:27 AM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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As far as i can see no visable spelling mistakes etc
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Old 08-09-2009, 08:42 AM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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As far as i can see no visable spelling mistakes etc
How ironic

no visible spelling mistakes eh!!
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Old 08-09-2009, 09:31 AM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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I haven't done one of these in a while. This should be fun. Please note: Everything that I say, I say to help. That being stated:

First Impressions

"People really need to start finding more diverse free themes...or tweaking them some more..."

Design

You need a better logo. The outlined letters simply do not strike me as visually attractive. In addition, that color isn't found anywhere else in the color scheme of your website.

The theme you're using doesn't offer much in the way of branding. The organization is good, but you could use some more customization. Plus, you're not taking full advantage of the thumbnails feature. Using your favicon image for all of the post images makes the site feel kind of empty. I would spend some time finding interesting images.

Also, I would use excerpts in categories as well as on the homepage, and make only the article page itself full-length.

Content

You should probably hire an editor to clean up some of your content, and then study what they do to improve your own writing skills. You are making a lot of grammar mistakes, some noticeable, some not. Random capitalization, misuse of commas, and odd sentence structure are a few.

Grammar aside, you should revise your post titles. They could be modified to draw in a lot more attention. I recommend visiting http://www.copyblogger.com for a ton of tips on making great titles.

The content itself is informative. Good job.

Those are my personal thoughts. Let me know if you need more help.
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Old 08-09-2009, 09:40 AM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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Hi,

Your magazine- style template is nice and professional. The logo is unique. As you add more contents to your website, you can gain more traffic and improve search engine ranking.
There are many other ways to monetize your website. You can sell the banner space of your website through buysellads.com, join domain name registrar affiliate program, place ads from other network such as Chitika, Widgetbucks, Adbrite etc.
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Old 08-09-2009, 02:08 PM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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i agree with changing the generic image association on the front page, you should have a separate image for each posting...otherwise i think it's nice and clean presentation wise.
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Old 08-09-2009, 07:23 PM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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I'm not so sure about the statement about dashes. At least I hope it isn't true
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Old 08-09-2009, 10:10 PM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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Thank you all for the great reviews, thankyou everyone who liked the website .

As for Sneakyheathen : Thanks a lot, and i will consider all of those , actually i have already started looking for images, i just wanted to change the images to the my thumbnail and see but yes, i have not actually started getting traffic as yet and will surely do that.

About the content : i will be looking into it once more and ill do it myself i guess

Thanks for the copyblogger tips and i will make sure i revise my heading so that i draw in more traffic

Thanks forumplace for the monetization techniques, i will surely look into them as well

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Old 08-11-2009, 05:49 PM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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In my opinion, the only thing cool about your site is the logo, my friend.
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Old 08-11-2009, 11:33 PM Re: Please review my website and give suggestions
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Your site looks okay. Nothing really eye-catching. The colors are nice and go along well with the rest of the site.
The layout is all too common.
I would try to use different images for the sections that you have under "Domain Buying Tips" and "Domain Flipping" to make the site less dull.
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