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Old 08-12-2009, 07:49 AM A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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I've made a few revisions to the site, both content, product and design.

Pick one of the above mentioned aspects, or all three if you feel generous! Just be nice

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Old 08-12-2009, 08:04 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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1. "Make savings last" text on the image - you need to add anti-aliasing "smooth" (character panel in Photoshop) - it also looks distorted in terms of height (squashed).

2. Dedicated Server and Reseller Server headings are not v-aligned correctly
2a. In the same area, the gradient boxes seem a bit tacky - try adding a lighter shade of grey for a much smoother and dimensional look. Gradient adds depth but too much of it makes it look like a cheap effect.

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http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/v...hosting.com%2F

http://validator.w3.org/check?verbos...hosting.com%2F
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Old 08-12-2009, 08:20 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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2. Dedicated Server and Reseller Server headings are not v-aligned correctly
I'm not sure I follow you, everything I looked at looks lined up to me.
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Old 08-12-2009, 08:33 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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I'm not sure I follow you, everything I looked at looks lined up to me.
Thats because it looks OK in IE7...but not Firefox. Dooh!

I agree that you need to anti-alias the text.

You know this is a waste of valuable screen real estate.
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Welcome to Bright Fuse Hosting!
Do you think anybody cares?

I like the JavaScript menu a lot. Very smooth.
Much better than the SuperFish.
But if you have a JavaScript menu you really
need to provide a sitemap as well for search engines
that don't interpret JS.
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Old 08-12-2009, 02:53 PM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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Old 08-12-2009, 06:56 PM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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it looks ok, but the 3 images at the center of the page looks a bit weird because of the background. it looks too "rigid". the problem occurs when i use IE 6 to look at your page. I tried FF its ok but you should consider making your site proper for as many browsers as possible
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Old 08-12-2009, 07:41 PM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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2a. In the same area, the gradient boxes seem a bit tacky - try adding a lighter shade of grey for a much smoother and dimensional look. Gradient adds depth but too much of it makes it look like a cheap effect.
Re-read the above quote and I don't think I was clear enough -

when I say "too much of it" - I meant if the contrast is strong between point a and b.

In your case, it is a mid grey tone to absolute white. You should make it a light grey to mid grey or light grey to white so it doesn't look rookie-ish.

look at the top banner of this website.. the dark blue to a few shades lighter.. that looks nice but in your case the contrast is too strong.
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Old 08-13-2009, 12:36 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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need to provide a sitemap as well for search engines
that don't interpret JS.
How?

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Thats because it looks OK in IE7...but not Firefox. Dooh!
I'm looking in FF and IE7/8.
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Old 08-13-2009, 01:16 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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There is only one thing that stands out to me. You need a little padding in the lower part of the page and on secondary pages. The text needs a little more white space to flow with the page. It appears too close the the left and right of the page boarder. Other than that, I'd say that's quite an impressive server rack you got there
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Old 08-13-2009, 08:21 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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There is only one thing that stands out to me. You need a little padding in the lower part of the page and on secondary pages. The text needs a little more white space to flow with the page. It appears too close the the left and right of the page boarder. Other than that, I'd say that's quite an impressive server rack you got there
Why thank you! So you're talking about the text just being too close to the edges of the white table correct?

General question: How do my plans/packages look?
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Old 08-13-2009, 11:15 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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That's correct. If you look at the 3 boxes you have above the text, the padding between the boxes and the edge of the page is far greater than the text padding.
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Old 08-13-2009, 04:23 PM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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It looks good to me so far.
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Old 08-13-2009, 06:00 PM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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Old 08-13-2009, 11:34 PM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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I have reviewed your website.I think your site design well but the content of website is less and you have better add more content to your site.
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Old 08-20-2009, 12:50 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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I have reviewed your website.I think your site design well but the content of website is less and you have better add more content to your site.
Be specific.
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Old 08-20-2009, 01:14 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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hmm the website is ok looking. I feel like some of the elements could be designed better they look a little amateurish. Also i dont get a hosting website feel when i go to the page..
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Old 08-20-2009, 02:20 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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hmm the website is ok looking. I feel like some of the elements could be designed better they look a little amateurish. Also i dont get a hosting website feel when i go to the page..
What looks amateur, why don't you get that feel?

Be specific otherwise, don't reply because you aren't helping.
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Old 08-20-2009, 04:47 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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I like the 'B' logo.. But what does the natural landscape have to do with web hosting..Unless you offer green solutions (powered by green tech).

Overall, clean and simple site
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Old 08-20-2009, 05:34 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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But what does the natural landscape have to do with web hosting..
What else would you suggest then?
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Old 08-20-2009, 10:01 AM Re: A Few New Revisions - Please Review
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Navigation is easy and looks good overall!
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