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As thefandago said, there is too much going on.
I think it all looks very nice, polished and neat but unfortunately there is too much going on; kind of like when you have a desire for a chocolate bar but when you enter the shop there is so much that you just don't know what you want and the desire is now has become a chore; get it and get out..
You should chop down your homepage into 3 additional pages. Put your most important pitch on the homepage and if people are interested, they will click on the necessary links to research more on it.
But in terms of design it looks good. You're using a small size font so I would probably suggest a tahoma/verdana for a sharper look as your standard font.
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