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Old 08-28-2009, 12:49 PM Review Request for my internet marketing site
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Please provide some short, basic feedback on my site. I only do marketing online for local businesses.
Thanks for your help!

PS - I'm pretty thick-skinned, so don't hold back, but do provide some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.
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Old 08-28-2009, 05:12 PM Re: Review Request for my internet marketing site
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Hi Jack ,
I like the Logo being highlighted in such a big way But in the whole page , the email address being the way to contact is in a very ignored state .
I am not sure if you really want your visitors to know more about you / owner and get to online bill pay, schedule appointment etc actionable items , but they are also pretty much down ?
The newsletter box took a dummy email id i submitted but it didnt respond on the next page if i was subscribed etc .
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Old 08-30-2009, 05:35 PM Re: Review Request for my internet marketing site
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The logo - thats the killer. Its too big. Reduce the header to around 80 pixels high at the max. Other than that, simple and practical.
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Old 08-30-2009, 06:11 PM Re: Review Request for my internet marketing site
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1. As mentioned, logo is a bit too large and doesn't have anti-aliasing
2. email link above navigation doesn't need to be 2 lines, should just make it one line and also add padding-bottom;3px; to neaten it up.

3. The jpg of Jack is fine however the text within the jpg could use of some graphical overhaul - why use standardise font and not design as a JPG when you can already do that in HTML? Get a nice glossy JPG going with some red graphs or something to spice it up

4. Quick marketing tip JPG needs anti-aliasing
5. "A local web marketing.." at the very bottom could do with some padding-bottom
6. I think you're overdoing it with the pictures of Jack. I came across a page with two appearances - ease it up?
7. http://validator.w3.org/check?verbos...%2Fdefault.htm

As for most part; I think it is very well formatted and uniformed.
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Old 08-31-2009, 06:18 AM Re: Review Request for my internet marketing site
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Yes my first advice to you that you need to really work on logo

that;s a first impression for peple
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Old 09-10-2009, 12:15 PM Re: Review Request for my internet marketing site
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Thanks for all the great tips! You are a very valuable resource and I appreciate your taking the time to help me out. I will be making these changes soon!
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