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Old 09-15-2009, 05:19 PM Review My Brute Game Guide
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I am currently developing a My Brute Game Guide and would love to see your reviews. I have had this site reviewed on several other forums and the input I have received has been great so far and it has really molded how I have continued to develop the site.

I have been running the blog for about a month and have created about 20 posts.

If you're not sure what My Brute is please feel free to check out our tutorial on how to create a My Brute.

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Old 09-15-2009, 08:12 PM Re: Review My Brute Game Guide
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It is good, it just isn't anything special, no offence.
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Old 09-16-2009, 12:19 AM Re: Review My Brute Game Guide
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It is good, it just isn't anything special, no offence.
No offense taken, but what can I do to improve it?
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Old 09-16-2009, 11:15 PM Re: Review My Brute Game Guide
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The logo is very creative, I think you need to put a little bit more into everything else aswell.
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Old 09-17-2009, 03:27 AM Re: Review My Brute Game Guide
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The bottom graphics of your site is good. But Top part of your site is not so impressive. you also need to change the ad layout of your site. Put the ad to other part of your site to improve the visibility of the ads.
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Old 09-17-2009, 04:52 AM Re: Review My Brute Game Guide
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Nice site, I have played the game before and can see that your going for the same style. I really like the logo but just dont get the menu top right, it just looked like a block of text. Also there is alot of text on the home page maybe cut down the number of posts it shows.
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Old 09-17-2009, 04:08 PM Re: Review My Brute Game Guide
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No offense taken, but what can I do to improve it?
I would suggest just giving it a little more life.

I mean it is a well designed site, and i am sure it is well coded, but it just doesn't stand out much from the next site.
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Old 09-17-2009, 05:26 PM Re: Review My Brute Game Guide
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Here are my immediate impressions:

Very nice logo, though not immediately clear what it means. Is it a game? Maybe you might want to include something like "A game to end all games" or some other tag line that describes what "My Brute" is.

Overall, the page looks somewhat cluttered. This is because nearly everything is in the same font style and color (black) with the exception of the main links which match the background color on the page.

I would recommend using a different font typeface or color for all of your headlines, and again, for links. For example, on the left side of the page where all your comments and navigation links are located, the only difference is that "Categories" is slightly bolder than all of the sections below, so it doesn't draw my eye easily... You want each section to stand out so it can be seen at a quick glance.

Under recent comments, it might be helpful if there was a blank line between each comment. Even though there is a tiny icon to the left of each new comment, they all appear to run together which makes it a bit difficult to read.
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Old 09-17-2009, 09:05 PM Re: Review My Brute Game Guide
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I think its meant to be a tutorial site for the game
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Old 09-18-2009, 02:45 AM
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nice work you can improve your work 1st judge your mind
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