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Old 09-22-2009, 03:53 PM Looking for suggestions on my site
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Hi

I am looking for some suggestions for my business site. I am going for a nice clean look but at the same time feel like my site is a little too cluttered. Fresh perspectives are always helpful so thanks in advance for you suggestions! Constructive criticism is encouraged!

http://www.moorewebexposure.com

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Old 09-22-2009, 07:16 PM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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I think it's close to perfect. You could add some text on the top next to the phone number saying something that would make them want to call. Example: "Start getting the exposure your site needs today!"

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Old 09-22-2009, 08:05 PM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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I think you need to decide exactly what you want the visitors to do on your site...

do you want them to sign up for the newsletter or to contact you (like activegamez says)?

A better call-to-action button might help. I would also put your 3 packages at the bottom into bullet points so it's easier to read. Just a few ideas.
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Old 09-24-2009, 11:59 AM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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The number "(503)895-2523" appears above the banner in it's own white this looks a bit weird to me. The main body of the homepage looks a little bland maybe, larger text a splash of colour? I'd drop the address to the footer.
I agree with matthunter about the bullet points for the packages.
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Old 09-24-2009, 01:27 PM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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you site really needs to be more... graphical... and I don't mean post a lot of images... I'm saying it needs a sense of appeal

When I look at the site first thing my eye was drawn to was the photograph, then the logo then I'm lost... There needs to be flow and momentum especially with the service you're offering
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Old 09-24-2009, 02:58 PM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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I do like it. I wonder if you took those black lines in the side bar out and added some background gradient color?
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Old 09-25-2009, 06:31 PM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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Don't like at all. It doesn't look professionnal, as I see 5 columns, then 2 below, and then 3, and 3 again, but different, at the bottom.
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Old 09-26-2009, 08:26 AM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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I agree the number at the top seems to be lost. I like the site because it's simple and has a clean and organized contents.

I think you can put some contents in both left and right part of your site because it's kinda empty.
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Old 09-26-2009, 08:32 AM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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I liked the site and think you did a nice job on it. It was easy to navigate. I do think you need more graphics on the site as well as a bit more information on your services. The top banner was a tough color for me with the white background. Perhaps tone down just a bit?
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Old 09-26-2009, 08:36 AM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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I think your site is clean, but the logo doesnt fit with the rest, maybe something more graphical?
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Old 09-26-2009, 11:31 AM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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Formatting is nice but too plain. Need some coloring or imaging.
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Old 09-27-2009, 06:36 PM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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I think your site is clean, but I Think that you site really needs to be more graphical and need some coloring ...

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Old 09-27-2009, 10:42 PM Re: Looking for suggestions on my site
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I think the site looks too simple. The logo especially, and it doesn't really invite visitors to stay long. Maybe you need more colors...
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