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Old 10-01-2009, 02:59 AM Pls. Review: Teeth Whitening Website
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hello guys.. especially the gurus.. can you review my website? btw, here's the link

http://whiteningonwheels.com/

many thanks..
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Old 10-01-2009, 10:03 AM Re: Pls. Review: Teeth Whitening Website
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good site, can sort of tell its a template - but its not too bad. Good amount of text on the page and like the image. One thing on quick inspection, for SEO there are certain things required. In your coding there are meta descriptions missing
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Old 10-01-2009, 10:40 AM Re: Pls. Review: Teeth Whitening Website
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Love it! Colors are professional and calming. Photos are beautiful and eye catching. Background is great.

The video is sort of weird on FF for Mac (not sure about other browsers). It looks like and old tv with zig zag lines through it? Screen shot attached.
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Old 10-04-2009, 08:10 PM Re: Pls. Review: Teeth Whitening Website
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Hello. Nice website. For a teeth whitening site it looks good. I wouldn't say I was a guru but I know a good site when I see one or not. It is clearly displaying the product and service on different pages. The video is in the right place and the header logo isn't too big either. But I would say that more SEO would need to be done on your site if you are really wanting to rank for the whole purpose you have made the site in the first place then you need to add them keywords and description and submit it to lots of search engines for indexing for the keywords you are going after being teeth whitening I presume.
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Old 10-05-2009, 05:13 AM Re: Pls. Review: Teeth Whitening Website
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You know now I want to work like a whiteonwheels . Good website, probably a template? Who cares, the site looks good. I can see a huge potential on this website, but with out SEO, it will keep in the dark.

Page Rank: 2
Alexa: 1,863,197
Compete: 0
mozRank: 1.66

Again like thewebtaylor mention

You don't have meta description and keywords.


<meta name="keywords" content="">
<meta name="description" content="">

I will suggest do a good ON-PAGE SEO, but mainly focus on the OFF-PAGE SEO, because it will be the one that is going to bring you excellent traffic.

I don't know if a blog can work in this kind of type of business, or if it will be good.
But blogs with information related to your industry, always drive traffic.

Speed Optimization

I think you can do much better in there. You home page weights right now 752KB.
You can easily optimize pictures and backgrounds. Only on pictures you have 567KB. Check this image is only 135KB http://whiteningonwheels.com/images/...main_index.jpg. After I optimize, the new size is under 35KB. I attached the picture and quality is pretty much the same.

If you do that with the whole website you get a faster website and lose less prospect clients. Not everybody has DSL. People still use 56KB
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Old 10-06-2009, 02:41 PM Re: Pls. Review: Teeth Whitening Website
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looks good but i find the background too intrusive and you need to optimise your images
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Old 10-06-2009, 03:46 PM Re: Pls. Review: Teeth Whitening Website
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I like all of the models with the white teeth
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Old 10-07-2009, 11:36 AM Re: Pls. Review: Teeth Whitening Website
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hi looks good, I can suggest a image fade (rotation) of the image with the lady with the flowers, that would help to make your site look very attractive.
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