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Header text is very weak and unprofessional while the stock image is overpowering and IMO should include an attorney. Buttons are unnecessarily long while the content seams to narrow and should be expanded. The background should consist of something more but not too busy, maybe even a light gradiant would help if nothing else.
There are terms everywhere! This needs to be organized, and the current vertical style makes the page very long and non user friendly which is also why the page would look better if expanded width.
Hope this helps, site is definitely not lacking content you just need to organize it better.
Edit: Also I just noticed you have a "Testimonial" thing that changes quotes. The fact that i didnt even notice it tells me its in the wrong place, and what would you think about changing that image at the top of the page every few seconds with a different testimonial contained in a transparent box? you could leave the "call now..etc and have it fade into the left of it. (although i dont like how it says "Call now" its not necessary and seems possibly desprate like some infomercial or something.)
Last edited by R.M.C.; 10-12-2009 at 11:46 PM..
Reason: just noticed
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