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Old 11-29-2009, 11:31 AM Slag off my website
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Hello guys,

Just updated my website, so feel free to comment: http://www.vkw91.co.uk

Cheers,

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Old 11-29-2009, 11:39 AM Re: Slag off my website
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Very unique website, I like it. But the one thing that kinda sticks out to me is the copyright, I would move it. And on your contact page under online form, the Title, Full Name, & Email, Telephone don't line up and are touching eachother.
But over all I like the site.

*note- i'm using IE8
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Old 11-29-2009, 01:05 PM Re: Slag off my website
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Very unique website, I like it. But the one thing that kinda sticks out to me is the copyright, I would move it. And on your contact page under online form, the Title, Full Name, & Email, Telephone don't line up and are touching eachother.
But over all I like the site.

*note- i'm using IE8
Cheers for the feedback
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Old 11-29-2009, 03:26 PM Re: Slag off my website
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ditto on the copyright section.

regarding the contact form, i feel it should be more uniform. meaning, if you have the label to the left of the input/textarea, they should all be to the left. same if you have the label above the input/textarea. it just makes it look more uniform.

there appears to be issues with the wood background tile seams. it looks a bit broken around the navigation, logo, and view work/contact me links.

overall i like the design, though the wood background is really overdone, imho. a lot of other designers have the same concept.

is that the 'advent' font? works well.
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Old 11-29-2009, 04:03 PM Re: Slag off my website
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Great design concept. Two things though:

The wood in the header images don't quite line up with the wood in the background.

I would end the paper at the bottom of the page and leave an inch or half-inch of wood background underneath.
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Old 11-30-2009, 06:50 AM Re: Slag off my website
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Thanks once again for the feedback!

@wickedfactor Yeah, the typeface is advent! Its a casual geek style sort of font imo...
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Old 11-30-2009, 10:48 AM Re: Slag off my website
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Very nice.
Well done.

However,, Is it just me or around your logo the background image and the floor boards dont seem to line up / look misaligned?

Maybe its just me.
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Old 11-30-2009, 11:55 AM Re: Slag off my website
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Overall it's really nice - I like it a lot. It flows well and great choice of colors. I ditto the comments above and will add that maybe you should warn people there will be sound on your pages, and/or give an option on the home page to turn the sound off as they navigate through. Just an idea as you never know where some people are when they are surfing the net! Good job!
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Old 11-30-2009, 05:43 PM Re: Slag off my website
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It looks great, the only problem is the not so seamless background, though it only shows up right behind the navigation.

http://www.imagespace.us/images/8biq91o6v09gws7wcz.jpg
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Old 01-12-2010, 03:54 PM Re: Slag off my website
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Thanks for the feedback guys. I've made some amendments to the homepage layout and have also got rid of the sound (I thought I had removed it!) Just need to fix the background. I have found that it is on certain screen sizes/resolutions.

Thanks again for the feedback
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Old 01-12-2010, 04:18 PM Re: Slag off my website
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typo "good sence of humour"

the wood theme isn't unique by any means but it's well done

layout falls apart (text is hidden) when text size is increased two notches

what's with using this for spacing ?

<p>&nbsp;</p>
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<p>&nbsp;</p>


your copyright falls behind the content div in firefox on windows

you certainly have a flair for design just need a few little tweaks on the site
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Old 01-12-2010, 04:28 PM Re: Slag off my website
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Just making all the tweaks now. I've neglected my website for too long!

Thanks for the comments - much appreciated.
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Old 01-12-2010, 04:51 PM Re: Slag off my website
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I liked very much your site. There is a great visual and a good navigation.
The background is very nice, I been seeing the wood background a few times this last days and it nice.
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Old 01-12-2010, 05:19 PM Re: Slag off my website
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I really love the design.

Did you make it yourself?

The copyright section looks fine to me.
The social bookmarking section looks amazing.
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Old 01-12-2010, 11:38 PM Re: Slag off my website
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Nice design, looks good. Only thing I see that looks out of place, is on your contact page http://www.vkw91.co.uk/contact.php it says "online form" at the top...just seems kind of out of place to me...maybe remove it..?
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Old 01-13-2010, 05:47 AM Re: Slag off my website
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I think it is really nice.
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Old 01-13-2010, 11:48 AM Re: Slag off my website
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Thanks for the feedback guys. I really do appreciate it!

@trafficke.com - yeah all the design and coding is done by me, including all the actual work on there too!
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Old 01-13-2010, 03:07 PM Re: Slag off my website
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The background is really choppy especially around your logo, and to be honest the wood does not go that well with the site.
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Old 01-14-2010, 05:26 PM Re: Slag off my website
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Thanks for your comments Knight13 - I did use to have a version of that website with a white background live, but it just wasn't me. (see attached!)
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Old 01-14-2010, 05:32 PM Re: Slag off my website
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The white background makes it look 100 times better, i would go with that but in the end it is your choice.
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