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Alright, be brutal...I need to know what is wrong
Old 12-09-2009, 10:15 AM Alright, be brutal...I need to know what is wrong
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I need to know what it wrong here. I have been workign on it too long and I am blinded to the errors that are there.

I need your help, tell me what you think some an SEO and design standpoint.
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Old 12-09-2009, 11:11 AM Re: Alright, be brutal...I need to know what is wrong
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search engine wise, EXCELLENT!
design wise, I would try abit more on that. It just seems too crowded for some unknown reason, I remember when you first posted this site and had a similar reply to that. I would try adjusting the font size slightly and divy up the home page more so there's not so much text there Ex: create new pages to put the text. See what that does then try posting back.
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Old 12-09-2009, 02:29 PM Re: Alright, be brutal...I need to know what is wrong
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Good lord, you did help me before!

I thought I added in enough space after that discussion. Are you speaking about too much text in the outer frame of the page or in the squishy center?
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Old 12-09-2009, 02:37 PM Re: Alright, be brutal...I need to know what is wrong
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A lot more whitespace would be great.

On my to-do list would be:

Larger font/line height overall.

Larger header. Logo on top. Description on bottom. Lose buttons in favor of text links.

Work some magic on the left sidebar navigation. As is, it looks more like google ads than part of the site.

Slim down center and widen sidebars to accommodate larger font and more whitespace.
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Old 12-09-2009, 02:55 PM Re: Alright, be brutal...I need to know what is wrong
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Why are you using that huge margin/padding on the bottom ?

You're getting float drop in IE6, the right nav is below the left nav - that's usually caused by either a too-tight fit (which IE6 doesn't like), or just the sum of the widths of the content being too wide for the container.
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Old 12-10-2009, 10:07 AM Re: Alright, be brutal...I need to know what is wrong
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Don't you think there is too much of text? I am not able to decide where to look first. The line with the 1-800 number needs to be more prominent.
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Old 12-10-2009, 10:14 AM Re: Alright, be brutal...I need to know what is wrong
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With the promotions area you could include something about clear out items. That attracts attention usually.
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