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Old 01-14-2010, 03:55 PM Please, review my latest site
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Hi,
This is my latest project - a cleaning and restoration site.

My goal was to create a large background site with a clean and light design, and easy navigation. I put the main image in the footer, because the content is most important here.

Started with a simple city skyline photo and added some raindrops and little steam effects, I think it looks good...

Your comments are welcome. Thanks!

P.S. The logo is not my work...

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Old 01-14-2010, 04:04 PM Re: Please, review my latest site
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The background really stands out. This is great! One of the best designs I have ever seen!
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Old 01-14-2010, 04:09 PM Re: Please, review my latest site
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Old 01-14-2010, 06:46 PM Re: Please, review my latest site
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Very simple and too the point. I like how you put the large graphic at the bottom. Very catchy.
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Old 01-14-2010, 07:00 PM Re: Please, review my latest site
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The site looks nice. However, the loading time of home page is a bit long. It's taking about 15+ seconds to load.
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Old 01-14-2010, 07:38 PM Re: Please, review my latest site
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Looks nice, everything seems to work together, and it loaded in a couple seconds for me, good job on it.
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Old 01-14-2010, 09:03 PM Re: Please, review my latest site
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The site looks nice. However, the loading time of home page is a bit long. It's taking about 15+ seconds to load.
I agree the design looks great, and you definitely got what you were aiming for, very simple and color scheme looks nice but it does take quite awhile to load
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Old 01-15-2010, 01:15 PM Re: Please, review my latest site
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I like the site but you could really use some refinement in your text on the homepage. Nothing major but there are a few grammar and punctuation errors.
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Old 01-15-2010, 05:08 PM Re: Please, review my latest site
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Thank you all!

I will fix the punctuation errors and will ask the site owners to fix their grammar errors and give me a refined text .

Waiting for more suggestions!
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Old 01-15-2010, 05:47 PM Re: Please, review my latest site
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I would suggest you to put pictures on the left side, and text on the right side. The eye automatically turns to the right (and buttom), so if you believe that the text is the most important part of the page you will have to put the text in that focus area.
Front page could be a little more interesting. A bit too much text there.

Else it is a very nice and clean site. :-)
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Old 01-17-2010, 07:34 PM Re: Please, review my latest site
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i found the design pretty good. but i did not really like the logo of the site, i think it did not fit in the rest of the site.
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Old 01-17-2010, 10:53 PM Re: Please, review my latest site
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i found the design pretty good. but i did not really like the logo of the site, i think it did not fit in the rest of the site.
You are right. I did not design the logo, I just polished it a little to fit as much as possible, but I can`t change it more than that!

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I would suggest you to put pictures on the left side, and text on the right side.
I might do that, thanks, I will speak to the site owners
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Old 01-18-2010, 11:20 AM Re: Please, review my latest site
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very nice but your background images are to big (filesize) try jpegs instead
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