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Originally Posted by solvision
OK i've done away with the forum now. The site is live.
How about round 2 for review?
I've done away with the splash, and most of the other comments were related to the forum, which is now no longer an issue.
Thanks in advance guys
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If you are going to frame it- I would consider maybe a color other than white for the background. Just too much white.
Another run proofreading it. A comma here and there plus a I know there's a "to" in there that should be "too".
Also, if its simple you are shooting for, you can not get any more simpler than "what is a website?", "What are the benefits of having a website?", "choosing an effective domain name" and more information on the TLDs and what they actually mean (or are supposed to mean).
Much better than the splash and forum.
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