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Old 02-28-2010, 06:12 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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@kenipet,

that is a very good suggestion, i will work with it

@delvec,

yeah you're right there bro, i did it with xara3d coz i'm not that good with graphics and am still looking someone to make me a logo ( a free would be much appreciated)

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and the ad at the top-
Why on earth would you advertise for another game that takes you AWAY from your page? The idea is to get people to play the games on your site, not drive them away- right?
it might be a wrong idea but, i still own that site i advertise on the top ad. That site was made for adsense for domains and want to experience how it works.
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Old 03-07-2010, 05:27 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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oh, just added a new forum to my site.
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Old 03-08-2010, 07:17 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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i like the site especially cause it involves games. Just work on the logo and advertise more interesting games to increase traffic
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Old 03-12-2010, 01:54 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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i like the site especially cause it involves games. Just work on the logo and advertise more interesting games to increase traffic
thanks,

I am adding 20 to 100 games on my site everyday. I also created a fanpage on Facebook for my site. Just how many of you have had success using facebook to increase traffic?
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Old 03-13-2010, 12:30 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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I think your site actually looks really good! I think it's also easy to navigate and it is professional looking which is definitely a good thing.

I think the people here have made some good suggestions to you, but I wouldn't worry about changing too much - focus more on getting more visitors.

Start your keyword research and then get to work with your link building...good luck!
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Old 03-17-2010, 12:25 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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Start your keyword research and then get to work with your link building...good luck!
--definitely I'll do this..
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Old 03-17-2010, 07:27 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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how about this for a logo?
http://gekkoweb.com/stuff/fad-screenshot.jpg
and the logo http://gekkoweb.com/stuff/fad-logo.jpg

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Old 03-17-2010, 07:51 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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Well like others have said the site is good but doesnt really shine as far as the graphics go you at least need to work out some way where people can see your brand name /logo and know this site is yours you could so something as simple as making your navigation bar have the same font as your logo and colors of it.

Now as far as your ads i think there fine except for the top 1 it really draws your attention away from your logo so i would put that ad under the logo and maybe spice up your header with a nice gradient background.

hope that bit helps
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Old 03-17-2010, 11:10 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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i think your site its great..
but i think the logo n the color not represent the "free games everyday"
maybe you can make more attractive...
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Old 03-17-2010, 01:04 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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Overall I like your website - looks good - I agree with the above comments about your logo, I think this can be improved as well. Try a google image search for joystick logos and see if you can get some ideas: http://images.google.co.uk/images?hl...-8&sa=N&tab=wi
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Old 03-18-2010, 01:34 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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not a big fan of the black--looks kinda childish..maybe switch to a lighter color
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Old 03-30-2010, 09:24 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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how about this for a logo?
http://gekkoweb.com/stuff/fad-screenshot.jpg
and the logo http://gekkoweb.com/stuff/fad-logo.jpg

donations welcome
thanks, I am using your logo now.

you would have my donation when my site starts earnings.
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Old 03-31-2010, 08:25 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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logo is a bit basic - maybe update later on. maybe have the description more noticeable. anyway the screenshots can be a bit more clear?
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