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Old 02-15-2010, 07:16 PM Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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I have been playing around with my game site for some time now. It is powered by wordpress pulling games from mochimedia. As of now it is only getting 10-15 unique visitors. I just wanted a little or more constructive criticism particularly on the ads placement before i start doing SEO for my site. The link is http://www.freearcadedaily.com/
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Old 02-15-2010, 08:42 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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The FAD logo looks quite blurry to me however if you got that fixed I'd say its a good site
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Old 02-16-2010, 12:04 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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I like it simple to navigate - agree with the logo needing to be better quality.
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Old 02-16-2010, 01:23 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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Everything looks good, the banners are in a good place and the colors are alright for a game site but your footer does not go all the way to the right hand side when viewed with a 800 x 600 screen resolution.
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Old 02-16-2010, 04:22 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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Everything looks good, the banners are in a good place and the colors are alright for a game site but your footer does not go all the way to the right hand side when viewed with a 800 x 600 screen resolution.
thanks, I didn't notice about the footer..i'll try to fix it...
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Old 02-16-2010, 04:23 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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The FAD logo looks quite blurry to me however if you got that fixed I'd say its a good site
the logo is just a temporary one..i'll make a new logo on my next free time
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Old 02-21-2010, 12:54 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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I like it simple to navigate - agree with the logo needing to be better quality.
I already change the logo.. how does it look now?
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Old 02-21-2010, 10:07 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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Looks good! I think this site will do well. Logo looks fine to me. Easy to nav, really fun site.
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Old 02-21-2010, 11:03 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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As a game site you might want an animated banner. There's several free sites to make them. The only other suggestion would be to also put your top menu in the sidebar. Other than that it's a very nice well done site. In fact I bookmarked it as I love games.
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Old 02-21-2010, 08:19 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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Kind of plain... to much squares, and its only black and white, try to spice it with some decoration and maybe more colors in the top menu.
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Old 02-22-2010, 10:06 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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Overall teh design looks pretty nice. However, I suggest you plan another arrangement for the adsense box, maybe in the upper side of the page.
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Old 02-25-2010, 07:09 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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another changes on my site is the color of the homepage game title from white to red.

Any suggestions on more colors in the top menu please.
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Old 02-25-2010, 08:44 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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The site is good, Idea well communicated. Layout perfect with good navigation features. As per me the buttons's font should be increased as it seems very small.
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Old 02-25-2010, 11:18 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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The site is good, Idea well communicated. Layout perfect with good navigation features.
thank you..

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As per me the buttons's font should be increased as it seems very small.
are you referring to the homepage navigation?
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Old 02-26-2010, 04:21 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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I received an error while trying to view your site. Are you modifying something?
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Old 02-26-2010, 10:30 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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I received an error while trying to view your site. Are you modifying something?
i'm so sorry if you got an error but I'm not modifying something.
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Old 02-27-2010, 02:08 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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Overall:The design is alright, the layout works well with the content that you are displaying.

Specifics:At the footer of your page (very bottom) your using "Times New Roman" as the default font, or a non-web safe font, which causes a default to be used. Your logo (to me) does look a bit fuzzy, you might want to make a bigger logo.
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Old 02-27-2010, 07:34 AM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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Overall:The design is alright, the layout works well with the content that you are displaying.

Specifics:At the footer of your page (very bottom) your using "Times New Roman" as the default font, or a non-web safe font, which causes a default to be used. Your logo (to me) does look a bit fuzzy, you might want to make a bigger logo.
with respect to your criticism thank you so much for the over all ratings.

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At the footer of your page (very bottom) your using "Times New Roman" as the default font, or a non-web safe font, which causes a default to be used.
i am not using "times new roman". i use arial with 12px

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Your logo (to me) does look a bit fuzzy, you might want to make a bigger logo.
i am thinking of that too.
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Old 02-27-2010, 12:17 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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The site looks very good in my opinion. Your title tag could use more. You use 17 characters and could use up to 66. You need to use keywords in it like games etc.
I about missed your welcome text. I suggest you lengthen it and use keywords for SEO.
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Old 02-27-2010, 02:06 PM Re: Just wanted a lil constructive criticism
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not a fan of the logo- wish there was more to it. Just looks like something created with Xara3d. Plus the Free Games part is her to read because of the 3d effect. Maybe add something arcade themed to it- joystick/controller.

It needs to be bigger-

and the ad at the top-
Why on earth would you advertise for another game that takes you AWAY from your page? The idea is to get people to play the games on your site, not drive them away- right?
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