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Old 02-23-2010, 02:29 AM New design approach
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Ok, i come up with a new design approach for this new subdomain that i hope is more contemporary. I don't really like it, but others seem to favor it over the original design. I miss the original design... What do you guys think?

http://medical.ionisis.com/

I am, notoriously, NOT a designer. Period. So i cannot understand what the competition is doing right, that i am doing wrong. I spent a day examining their sites, and i noticed that they had some common traits:

*) Almost NO text on the page! A paragraph, maybe two, 4 short paragraphs at the most.
*) A LOT of images! I hate images, and feel that they clutter up the real content....
*) "ORDER NOW!", All over the page. That seems like you are harassing the visitor, to me.....

As you can tell, i'm obviously not much for marketing either. So i am trying a new combination of page elements:
*) A SINGLE image (not a whole bunch of them), that attempts to quickly convey what the site is for, and what to do next
*) A reasonable amount of text, to explain the same
*) Some sample images (probably not the best idea, the way i'm doing it, though...)

So, i'm gathering feedback on this approach, and i'm running it for a couple of weeks to see where it gets me...

I just KNOW that there is a magic combination of on page elements that will catch and keep the user's interest and confidence. I just wish i could figure out what the heck that combination is! Until then, it's trial and error.

Thanx!
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Old 02-23-2010, 04:47 AM Re: New design approach
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i think it's more about SEO and marketing than the way you have the page layed out.

but i think your page looks great.

one thing though, you have "contact dionisis now" below the fold, like you can't see it unless you scroll down. and i kind of don't know what to do when i'm on teh site.

all those other sites with "buy it now!" might seem annoying, but it gives clear direction for what you want your visitor to do.

hope that helps
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Old 02-23-2010, 10:01 AM Re: New design approach
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Hmm, i can't find the "contact dionisis now"... But thanks for the feedback .
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Old 02-23-2010, 11:11 AM Re: New design approach
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Looks decent but i do not like the rounded corners or the banner they do not look like a medical type design, but other then that it looks good.
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Old 02-23-2010, 11:14 AM Re: New design approach
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Yeah, lol, i'm not diggin it at all...

Man, every time i see your avatar, i want to buy one of those masks, and hang it on my wall. I'm guess that you've seen "V for Vendetta", and that it's not just a coincidence... Great movie.
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Old 02-23-2010, 11:19 AM Re: New design approach
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The site looks very good.
Looks professional and loads fast.
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Old 02-23-2010, 11:33 AM Re: New design approach
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A good site will a very new concept with perfect navigational features.
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