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Old 04-14-2010, 04:23 PM Please review freesupplementfinder.com
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Looking for ideas to make my landing page more attractive please dont just say you site suck and just say its never going to work because it is and im happy with the way it looks but i know theres is a lot of great webmasters out there and if you have any good ideas please share them with me


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Old 04-14-2010, 04:27 PM Re: Please review freesupplementfinder.com
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and if you click on the other tabs at the top left like weight loss, muscle gain, male enhancement, let me know if you like the lay out like that im going with this how to get ripped in 4 weeks or less 2 step program but i was going with the old lay out were it is more like a store with a list of supplements like the other pages are
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Old 04-14-2010, 05:23 PM Re: Please review freesupplementfinder.com
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Honestly, it looks very "amatuerish." A site trying to generate business needs to look more professional so people can feel a bit more confident in the claims made. It's all in the presentation. You can offer the best products in the world, but if you can't present it right, you are toast.

You like steak, right? Imagine a beautiful porterhouse steak, sized just right and cooked to absolute perfection, no white lines. Juicy and seasoned ... Now, imagine I serve it to you not on a plate, but I grab a garbage can lid right off the can and plop your steak on it to present it to you. How do you feel about that steak now?

It's all in the presentation...

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Old 04-14-2010, 06:31 PM Re: Please review freesupplementfinder.com
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i was thinking about adding some logos like a paypal seal and a godaddy icon on the page to make it look more legit
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Old 04-14-2010, 08:05 PM Re: Please review freesupplementfinder.com
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That would help, but jazz it up. Look around at sites you like and try to emulate the style. Surely there are sites you have seen that scream professionalism.
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Old 04-17-2010, 03:34 AM Re: Please review freesupplementfinder.com
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Adding PayPal and GoDaddy logos is the least of your worries to make this site look more legit.

First of all, it resembles one of the original templates used in DreamWeaver, meh.

You should try to completely overhaul this. First find a good colour scheme to use. As of current there is no colour scheme just a random bunch of colours.

Next, get rid of the big bold fonts.

Try starting from there. Personally it just seems way too armature-ish.
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Old 04-17-2010, 06:43 AM Re: Please review freesupplementfinder.com
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hey ..does this really work.. I heard that its not good for health :P
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Old 04-17-2010, 10:05 AM Re: Please review freesupplementfinder.com
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It will not take a lot of time to clean your site up, maybe make the site mainly white and choose another color to add to the white, the banner you have is no good make a better one or have one made.

A lot of the product pictures are meant for a white background so make sure you make the pages white or at least make the backgrounds of the images transparent and they will look better.
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Old 04-18-2010, 12:41 AM Re: Please review freesupplementfinder.com
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hey im really impressed with your guys real idea and input kinda sucks to here my page looks amatuerish but it is the truth i have no clue how to design webpages layout i got a friend who im gona pay to make me some layouts but keep the ideas coming guys and thanks again for your time any helpful info will help
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