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Old 04-20-2010, 02:24 PM Review and suggestions for my first site?
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http://unforgivein.weebly.com/index.html

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Old 04-20-2010, 03:07 PM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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Nice..but I suggest changing the background..it messes up my monitor.
Also, edit the css and put
img { border: 0; }
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Old 04-20-2010, 03:17 PM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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I fixed the background. But where do i put the border 0 in?
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Old 04-20-2010, 03:20 PM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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PHP Code:
body{
  
margin:0px;
  
padding:0px;
  
background:#222 url(black_background.jpg) repeat;
  
text-align:center;
  
font:11px Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;
}
#container{
  
width:700px;
  
margin:auto;
  
padding-bottom:20px;
}

/* basic styles */
h1,h2,h3,h4,h5,h6{
  
font-family:Georgia,Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;
  
font-weight:lighter;
  
margin:10px 0px 0px 0px;
  
color:#222;
}
h1{
  
font-size:28px;
}
h2{
  
font-size:25px;
  
color:#0a294f;
}
h3{
  
font-size:22px;
  
color:#202f0f;
}
h4{
  
font-size:18px;
  
color:#911322;
}
h5{
  
font-size:16px;
  
color:#af3d0a;
}
h6{
  
font-size:11px;
  
font-weight:bold;
  
color:#222;
}
del{
  
color:#999;
}
acronym{
  
/*border-bottom:1px dotted #222;*/
  
border:none;
  
background:url(dottedborder_dark.gifrepeat-x bottom center;
  
padding-bottom:1px;
  
cursor:help;
}
hr{
  
width:100%;
  
border:0;
  
margin:5px 0px;
  
margin:2px 0px 5px 0px;
  
height:1px;
  
color:#777;
  
background-color:#777;
}
a{
  
color:#af2639;
  
text-decoration:none;
}
a:hover{
  
text-decoration:underline;
}

p{
  
line-height:22px;
  
margin:5px 0px 15px 0px;
  
/*text-align:justify;*/
}
.
noborder{
  
border:0;
}
/* I can't get <pre> to display inline very well so just use <span class="pre"> */
#content .pre{
  
font:11px "Courier New",Courier,sans-serif;
  
color:#af454a;
}

img{
  
border:none;
}
img.floatright,
img.floatleft,
#left img{
  
border:1px solid #222;
}
a:hover img.floatright,
a:hover img.floatleft,
#left a:hover img{
  
border:1px solid #af2639;
}

/* floats, positioning, and widths */
.floatleft{
  
float:left;
}
.
floatright{
  
float:right;
}
.
w50{
  
width:50%;
}
.
floatleft p{
  
padding:0px 10px 0px 0px;
}
.
floatright p{
  
padding:0px 0px 0px 10px;
}
img.floatleft{
  
margin:15px 15px 5px 0px;
}
img.floatright{
  
margin:15px 0px 5px 15px;
}

/* rounded corners */
.tl{background:#222 url(tl.gif) no-repeat top left;}
.tr{background:transparent url(tr.gifno-repeat top right;}
.
br{background:transparent url(br.gifno-repeat bottom right;}
.
bl{background:transparent url(bl.gifno-repeat bottom left;}

.
ltl{background:#efefef url(l_tl.gif) no-repeat top left;}
.ltr{background:transparent url(l_tr.gifno-repeat top right;}
.
lbr{background:transparent url(l_br.gifno-repeat bottom right;}
.
lbl{background:transparent url(l_bl.gifno-repeat bottom left;}

/* blockquotes and code*/
blockquote{
  
min-height:35px;
  
width:100%;
  
display:block;
  
margin:10px auto;
  
background:transparent url(quote.gifno-repeat 10px 10px;
}
html blockquote{
  
min-height:35px;
  
height:auto !important;
  
height:35px;
}
blockquote p{
  
margin:0px;
  
line-height:17px;
  
padding:10px 10px 10px 50px;
}
blockquote span{
  
color:#999;
  
font-size:9px;
  
padding-top:5px;
  
display:block;
}
blockquote span a{
  
color:#555;
  
text-decoration:none;
}
blockquote span a:hover{
  
text-decoration:underline;
}
blockquote.go{
  
background:transparent url(go.gifno-repeat 10px 50%;
}
blockquote.stop{
  
background:transparent url(stop.gifno-repeat 11px 50%;
}
blockquote.exclamation{
  
background:transparent url(exclamation.gifno-repeat 23px 50%;
}
code{
  
display:block;
  
width:92%;
  
margin:0px auto 15px auto;
  
line-height:17px;
}
code .red{
  
color:#af454a;
}

/* forms */
form select,
form input,
form textarea{
  
font:11px Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;
  
border:1px solid #888;
}
form input:hover,
form input:focus,
form textarea:hover,
form textarea:focus,
form select:hover,
form select:focus{
  
background-color:#f9f9f9;
  /*border:1px dotted #888;  optional thought */
  
border:1px solid #444;
}
form select{
  
padding:1px;
}
form input{
  
padding:1px;
}
form label{
  
display:block;
  
color:#777
}
form textarea{
  
padding:1px;
  
line-height:16px;
}
form p{
  
margin:10px 0px;
}

/* top section */
#top{
  
background:url(contentbg.gifrepeat-y top center;
}

/* very bottom curve */
#bottom{
  
background:url(container_b.gifno-repeat bottom center;
  
height:9px;
}
html #bottom{
  
margin-top:-4px;
}

/* header */
#header{
  
font:30px Georgia,Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;
  
width:680px;
  
height:175px;
  
margin:auto;
  
background:url(%%HEADERIMG%%) no-repeat top center;
  
text-align:left;
}
#title{
  
margin-top:130px;
  
margin-left:13px;
  
position:absolute;
  
color:#fff;
  
background-color:transparent;
  
cursor:default;
}

/* menubar */
.nav{
  
height:40px;
  
background-color:#222;
  
color:#fff;
  
width:680px;
  
margin:auto;
  
text-align:right;
  
font-size:11px;
  
cursor:default;
}
.
nav2{
  
height:40px;
}
#slogan{
  
position:absolute;
  
margin:11px 0px 0px 15px;
  
font-size:14px;
}
#navdiv{
  
float:left;
  
text-align:right;
}
#navlist{
  
list-style-type:none;
  
margin:0px;
  
padding:11px 8px 0px 0px;
  
width:670px;
}
#navlist li{
  
display:inline;
}
#navlist li a{
  
color:#999;
  
font-weight:bold;
  
text-decoration:none;
  
height:40px;
  
padding:8px 12px 14px 0px;
}
#navlist li a:hover{
  
color:#bfbfbf;
  /* other thoughts
  border-top:5px solid #fff;
  color:#df521b;
  */
}
#active a:link {
  
color:#fff;
}
#active a:hover {
  
color:#fff;
}
#active a:visited {
  
color:#fff;
}

/* content */
#content{
  
min-height:400px;
  
width:680px;
  
margin:auto;
  
color:#222;
  
text-align:left;
}
html #content{
  
min-height:400px;
  
height:auto !important;
  
height:400px;
}
#left{
  
float:left;
  
padding:10px 10px 20px 10px;
  
width660px;
}
html #left{
  
padding-top:20px;
}

/* sidebar */
#right{
  
width:190px;
  
float:right;
  
padding:20px 10px 20px 20px;
}
html #right{
  
padding-top:30px;
}
#right .sideitem{
  
margin-bottom:25px;
}
#right .sideitem h4{
  
font:12px Georgia,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;
  
font-weight:bold;
  
color:#222;
  
width:100%;
  
background:#fff url(dottedborder.gif) repeat-x bottom center;
  
padding-bottom:3px;
  
margin-bottom:13px;
}
#right .sideitem b{
  /*display:block;*/
}
#right .sideitem p{
  
padding:0px 5px;
}
#right .sideitem ul{
  
margin-left:-4px;
}

/* footer */
.footer{
  
height:30px;
  
width:680px;
  
margin:auto;
  
color:#fff;
  
text-align:left;
  
clear:both;
}
.
footer div{
  
height:30px;
}
#copyright{
  
text-align:left;
  
float:left;
  
padding:8px;
  
margin-top:0px !important;
  
margin-bottom:-16px;
}
#designcredit{
  
float:right;
  
text-align:right;
  
padding:8px;
  
margin-bottom:-16px;
}
#designcredit a{
  
color:#9f9f9f;
}
#designcredit a:hover{
  
color:#cf262d;
  
text-decoration:none;
}


/****************************** flyout menus ******************************/

#weebly-menus .weebly-menu-wrap {
  
z-index5000;
}

#weebly-menus .weebly-menu {
  
padding0;
  
margin0;
  list-
stylenone;
}

#weebly-menus .weebly-menu li {
  
floatleft;
  
clearleft;
  
width170px;
  
text-alignleft;
}

#weebly-menus .weebly-menu li a {
  
positionrelative;
  
displayblock;
  
width100%;
  
background#505050;
  
border-right1px solid #666666;
  
border-left1px solid #666666;
  
border-bottom1px solid #666666;
  
text-decorationnone;
  
font-size11px;
  
font-weightnormal;
  
line-height:1;
  
padding:3px;
  
color#ccc;
}

#weebly-menus .weebly-menu li a:hover {
  
background#878787;
}

#weebly-menus span.weebly-menu-title {
  
displayblock;
  
padding5px 10px;
}

#weebly-menus span.weebly-menu-more {
  
backgroundtransparent url(http://images.weebly.com/weebly/images/submenu_arrow.gif) no-repeat center top;
  
displayblock;
  
positionabsolute;
  
right5px;
  
top0;
  
font-familyCourier;
  
height28px;
  
line-height28px;
  
padding:1px 0 3px 0;

Here is the CSS code.
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Old 04-20-2010, 04:20 PM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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Looks good, i am not a wow player, but the design of your site looks good, nice job on it so far.
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Old 04-20-2010, 05:06 PM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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there isn't really anything to look at or comment on, it also looks like a free template and not on your own domain.
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Old 04-20-2010, 06:14 PM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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there isn't really anything to look at or comment on, it also looks like a free template and not on your own domain.
never said it was my own site.. I was asking because i'm going for the look of it, like it would be an interesting site and is worth to come back. It is a template and under a site but offers most of what if it was my own wordpress site.
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Old 04-20-2010, 07:19 PM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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I think it would look a little more interesting to your target audience if it looked more like this: http://www.templatepanic.com/article...ordpress-theme

That is just my opinion.
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Old 04-20-2010, 08:16 PM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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I would do that but its just that every single wow site that uses sites like what i'm using that template is used for fan sites, blogs and everything. there is just no uniqueness to that template sense so many use it
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Old 04-21-2010, 11:25 PM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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For a first site, it's pretty good. It's a bit plan though and lots of Weebly users have the save template.
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Old 04-23-2010, 10:14 PM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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nice but fill it with quality contents.
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Old 04-24-2010, 09:42 PM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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Isn't it World of Warcraft? Not world of warcraft?
Be consistent and correct.

http://unforgivein.weebly.com/warrior.html
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Old 04-27-2010, 06:47 AM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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I think a dictionary might have been handy before choosing your nickname and URL

'cos there's no 'i' in Unforgiven
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Old 04-27-2010, 09:10 AM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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Nice designed web ! Im a palyer of dota allstar, do you have a blog of this game ?
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Old 04-29-2010, 03:04 AM Re: Review and suggestions for my first site?
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i didnt get it like were to go didnt see any links besides the twitter button i think you need more content on you home page
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