I agree & disagree with some of the others
I am a developer working in business for 15 years & new to this forum but not new to this game
Comments to help & advise you
1 - first go then good for you & stick at it but stick at it & there are improvements to be made
2 - the site as it stands is not great - sorry mate it just isn't - look around the internet at websites that are great & see why. London Zoo to chopper tattoo to http://www.etsy.com/ & penguin books or even facebook. Clean designs, clean colours & great graphics when used.
3 - invest in good kit - if you cant afford the latest versions look for older copies of dreamweaver & or graphics programs - mates at uni might be able to help with this - academic priced versions can always be bought at much reduced prices.
4 - use some free resources - there are tons of free css templates out there that can be used as a base if you are not comfortable with your own work
5 - content is ultimately king & you have that but presentation is so important & that is lacking for you right now. Gray is not a great colour to use unless the whole site is black, white & gray. You should use a clean text navigation system with some CSS if necessary to create colour.
6 - errors - Your first page loads on the right then shifts to the left. Your form overlaps your margins.
Sorry mate get back to the drawing board & use some free resources - you clearly have the start here but it can go further - kind reviews telling you it looks outdated are understating the importance of not having a shop front that under sells your business
Dragon Man Kaletha
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