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Old 06-17-2010, 07:03 AM Portfolio site
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so ive spent the last few weeks making this site..it meant to kind of be a personal portfolio site and something that ill add to as i get better

so yeah

any advice and feedback is appreciated especially concerning colours and design

also, on the contact page is it better to have an email link or to have a form that automatically sends an email to me

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Old 06-21-2010, 05:06 AM Re: Portfolio site
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Hi Nick

With regards to the contact page, in my opinion both an email link and contact form would be good rather than an either/or approach.

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It comes across as very bland/empty/unfinished.
I would strongly reccomend intergrating a blog system (wordpress or custom) into the site rather than linking off to an external blog or atleast style them in a similar way. This will give the impression of it being one site rather than a mix and match.

It is worth while getting a domain name, they only cost a few $, for anyone wanting to be seen as a webdesigner, freelance or multinational mega company, a hotmail.com email dosnt inspire confidence nor does running the site from a subdomain.

I would recomend taking the google verification code out your header now that is is unneeded.

It is nice to see you are using divs, lists etc, I cant remember the last time I saw a "new" designer using them rather than tables.

Your stylesheet could do with refining, there are many many many rules that are repeated or unneeded.

The design is, as said above, too empty and bland. To entice anyone to use you as a designer your site needs to standout and look proffessional. Unfortunatly your site dosnt really do either and reminds me of the old frontpage clan sites back in the 1990's.

Overall, it seems you need to work on your design more than your code, this is good!

I hope you take the comments as they are ment, friendly advice and not malicious.

Good luck
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Old 06-21-2010, 10:41 AM Re: Portfolio site
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thanks heaps for the response
and yeah im a bit iffy on the design and always have been but i wanted to more so get something up, get some feedback then work on it again and at the moment its purely an experimental thing

and also thanks for the advice about the contact page as im kinda unsure where to go with it.
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Old 06-21-2010, 11:14 AM Re: Portfolio site
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You have a great resource avalible to you, your BMX photogaphy.

Using some of the bigger shots in your design will give it a nice edge, even to the point where maybe using a very high res one as the page background would look really nice. just make sure you use a solid colour, either dark grey or white for the background of text areas.

Dont be afraid to experiment on the wild side of design rather than edging on the "safe" side.
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Old 06-22-2010, 09:00 AM Re: Portfolio site
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what do you think about having all the content without having to scroll?
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Old 06-22-2010, 03:16 PM Re: Portfolio site
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I really think you should consider improving the design. Most designers use Photoshop to design website layouts, maybe you should take a look into it especially if you want to offer web design services. Do a search for web design services and checkout how your competition's website looks. When you are selling web design it is important to impress clients if not they will not buy.
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Old 06-25-2010, 06:36 AM Re: Portfolio site
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I think your design is okay to be honest. you may have changed it since you posted but its pretty clean and is not that fussy. i would use high res in your design but apart from that is perfect
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Old 06-25-2010, 07:57 PM Re: Portfolio site
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Your Portfolio page has two images. The personal blog image hyperlinks to a wordpress hosted vid-blog, the other image hyperlinks to photobucket where the image is stored. You need to edit your link
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Old 06-30-2010, 09:21 AM Re: Portfolio site
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thanks man
and yeah v2 is getting built now with a blog for the website rather than my personal one
and the portfolio is getting built after i get this site down pat
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Old 07-07-2010, 08:44 AM Re: Portfolio site
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okay so i've updated the site now and changed the design HEAPS
and even changed a bit of content

so let me know what you think and if anything could be improved, also if you could note improvements between this design and the previous design (the previous design is still hosted here)
and yes it is still hosted on a free site because i dont want to drop any cash on it just yet and it is purely an experiment

so have a look and let me know what ya'll think

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Old 07-07-2010, 09:15 AM Re: Portfolio site
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Your Portfolio page only has three thumbnail images, and only one of those images actually links through to a site. The other two hyperlink to Photobucket. Why not add 3 pages to your portfolio site for each image. Hyperlink the images to those pages and include some information about those sites? Doesn't have to be loads of info, perhaps just how you implemented the wordpress themes? Then you could also have a hyperlink to the sites for people to go and look at the site rather than just a screenshot of it.

I think your About page is a bit dark. Dark green text on dark background.

Anyway, your portfolio site has inspired me and I will be putting together my own Portfolio site (will be asking for reviews shortly Cheers
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Old 07-07-2010, 10:26 AM Re: Portfolio site
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yeah mate as i said in the above posts I'm new to the whole portfolio business so it's getting built as i go along and obviously its not a fully professional site yet and I'm using it more as a learning tool to learn about code and structure rather than actually getting clients yet

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you said the about page was a bit dark as the colour scheme is the same throughout do you think the colours were always to dark?

and i do like the idea about having the portfolio page link to project pages
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Old 07-08-2010, 03:35 PM Re: Portfolio site
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Nick,
The portfolio just needs a little more to catch someone's interest. I would make the homepage include more pictures, and make the writing larger, bolder, and differing in color. You want someone who gets to your homepage to want to explore it
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