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Old 06-30-2010, 01:19 AM Review my Travel Site :D
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Cebu Tours | Cebu Travel Guide


This is just about the beaches and places in Cebu, Philippines
Tell me which of the things is need to improve
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Old 06-30-2010, 01:53 PM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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Looks very bland, not much color at all. Looks more like a news clipping then a website.
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Old 06-30-2010, 03:37 PM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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i like it very simple, nice and clean wordpress theme and great content! thanks!
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Old 06-30-2010, 10:19 PM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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Looks pretty good.....
Some of the pictures do not load....
(loaded the second time)

Everything seems to work.....
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Old 07-01-2010, 12:36 AM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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thanks for the feedback.
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news clipping then a website.
i'd probably do it well in the next update. haven't get out of the house this week
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Old 07-01-2010, 06:17 PM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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Now for a real review..

Header section - the small photos at the top look like an afterthought and the black text of the heading gets lost in the dark photos underneath.

Your currency converter -- if you created that, add some padding to the form so the input boxes are not smashed up against the box's border.

I realize that English is not your native language, so I would really suggest that you find someone who's native language IS English to edit your content. The grammar and spelling are atrocious.

You've got some nice photos, I would suggest putting them in some sort of slideshow so that people don't have to keep clicking back and forth to view your photos.
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Old 07-01-2010, 09:01 PM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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Nice content and nice wordpress themes
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Old 07-01-2010, 10:44 PM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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LadynRed is spot on with her review.

Only other thing to add is perhaps the "Hotels in Cebu". It looks like there are bullets in there and there shouldnt be.

In regards to the the editing, its not bad. I understand what you mean, but its not very professional in my opinion. I would at least recommend getting a freelancer to look over it. I have never actually used them, but I have seen some people offering pretty cheap services on some freelancing websites that I visit.
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Old 07-02-2010, 01:23 AM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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Now for a real review..

Header section - the small photos at the top look like an afterthought and the black text of the heading gets lost in the dark photos underneath.

Your currency converter -- if you created that, add some padding to the form so the input boxes are not smashed up against the box's border.

I realize that English is not your native language, so I would really suggest that you find someone who's native language IS English to edit your content. The grammar and spelling are atrocious.

You've got some nice photos, I would suggest putting them in some sort of slideshow so that people don't have to keep clicking back and forth to view your photos.
thanks for the review.
i let one of my friends see it yesterday. and she also said the same thing.. infact she said my grammar is "horrible" lolz. - how much dyou think i shall spend for a freelancer to edit the incorrect in these pages?
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Old 07-02-2010, 07:34 AM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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$100 bucks maybe. All depends how much content you have. For that one page, I would say $20 .
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Old 07-02-2010, 01:13 PM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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Looks nice and everything.
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Old 07-03-2010, 12:54 PM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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very good except the header
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Old 07-03-2010, 01:16 PM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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You should add an About Us page so people know who they are dealing with.
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Old 07-03-2010, 07:34 PM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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Looks like you stole it from the early 90's. I would re-do most things on the site. I would start with the header needs a better design, looks like it has been done in word and the picture used looks 'cheap'
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Old 07-05-2010, 02:19 AM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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You should change header of your website. Remaining template is nice.
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Old 07-05-2010, 02:27 AM Re: Review my Travel Site :D
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thanks for all the input.
i'd changing the header since i suddenly feel that it hurts as i kept reading the thread
i'd be selecting some images for it. thanks
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