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Old 08-26-2010, 10:15 PM Here is it!!!
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After my thread was deleted, I guess I'm done with the forum rules?

Please check and review my site: http://www.cellspynow.com


Any comments, critics and suggestions..thanks
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Old 08-26-2010, 11:49 PM Re: Here is it!!!
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Sorry to say this but your site looks like every scam site i have ever seen, if i was you i would totally redesign it if you do not want people to know it is a scam.
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Old 08-27-2010, 12:41 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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I guess this guy is spamming every post here in this forum!!!

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Sorry to say this but your site looks like every scam site i have ever seen, if i was you i would totally redesign it if you do not want people to know it is a scam.

Thanks for the suggestion, really appreciate. Any thing that I can add?
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Old 08-27-2010, 01:29 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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after seeing ur site i suggest
please change the font of the paragraph below instant delivery it just hitting my eyes.
and divide the full paragraph into 2 or 3 that will look good.
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Old 08-27-2010, 01:30 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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Other than being illegal......

Too much bold text....
Perhaps a wider format would look better...
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Old 08-27-2010, 01:32 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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Other than being illegal......

Too much bold text....
Perhaps a wider format would look better...

Okay, thank you brother, I'll take it as a constructive suggestion...
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Old 08-27-2010, 01:34 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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Cool...it was intended to be constructive......
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Old 08-27-2010, 01:41 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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Looks like one of those sites that they pay you one cent to stay on for a minute or 2.
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Old 08-27-2010, 02:40 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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after seeing ur site i suggest
please change the font of the paragraph below instant delivery it just hitting my eyes.
and divide the full paragraph into 2 or 3 that will look good.

I see, yeah. I think i still have a lot of work to do. I guess this is still a no go..
Any suggestions how to make this site not look like a scam?
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Old 08-27-2010, 05:51 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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I see, yeah. I think i still have a lot of work to do. I guess this is still a no go..
Any suggestions how to make this site not look like a scam?
single page website look like scam more than a website.

what u can do here is -
>the whole site can be divided into 3 pages. 1 home page, 2.products page, and 3. contact page.
this 3 pages can cover the information of ur current site beautifully.

>just give it a simple design and ur good looking professional site is ready.

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Old 08-27-2010, 09:39 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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The 1990s are calling.

They want their website back.
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Old 08-27-2010, 10:50 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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The 1990s are calling.

They want their website back.
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<meta name="GENERATOR" content="Microsoft FrontPage 5.0">
<meta name="ProgId" content="FrontPage.Editor.Document">
'nuff said.
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Old 08-28-2010, 01:05 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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'nuff said.

I dont understand.... lolz
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Old 08-28-2010, 02:04 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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He means FrontPage is for losers.
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Old 08-28-2010, 11:56 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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I thought it was illegal to use frontpage on the internet now?

Anywho,
The site looks like one of theose pyramid scheme websites.
if you want to make it seem like your not scamming someone, do a complete redesign.
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Old 08-31-2010, 01:17 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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I thought it was illegal to use frontpage on the internet now?

Anywho,
The site looks like one of theose pyramid scheme websites.
if you want to make it seem like your not scamming someone, do a complete redesign.

And any suggestion on how to redesign this one?
My partner asked me to create frontpage design coz he heared that frontpage or one page or whatever they called that converts sales much...is it true?
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Old 08-31-2010, 01:24 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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He means FrontPage is for losers.

Thanks for that....Now, I understand....
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Old 08-31-2010, 04:08 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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My partner asked me to create frontpage design coz he heared that frontpage or one page or whatever they called that converts sales much...is it true?
Yes. Your partner is absolutely correct.

FrontPage designed websites do possess mystical sales conversion power.

In fact when I first landed on your web page I felt a strong subliminal desire to give you my credit card information.

Fortunately, in my case, I was the recipient of 12 years Jedi Mind Training so I was able to repel your Microsoft WYSIWYG black magic.

God help those other poor defenseless souls!
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Old 09-10-2010, 01:26 PM Re: Here is it!!!
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I don't think this stands out.. I feel like I've seen this site time and time again. Sorry, but I would redo the entire thing. Good Luck with this!
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Old 09-11-2010, 03:13 AM Re: Here is it!!!
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nice one, but you should work more on its design and template.
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