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Are you trying to target international business with this site? I'm from the US and the website doesn't give me any confidence that you's ship to me or any where else for that matter. If that's the case you're also going to want to put some type of money / weight conversion on the website.
If you're trying to target English speaking countries, you'll need to work on your grammar. Again, poor grammar / spelling doesn't instill a ton of confidence in the trustworthiness of your business.
You also have some goofy alignment / spacing issues with your text. For instance, your paragraphs are centered on the home page.
The logo's gotta go. Plain text would be better than what you have there. It immediately makes me think of a cheap website.
Do you make this product yourself? If so, include some pictures of the processing of the meat but keep it clean. I'm already freaked out about meat from a mail order type company.
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