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Old 09-27-2010, 01:35 AM Please help proof read my site
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HI,

If you have a few minutes spare please cold you have look at the content on my site.

http://www.iter-research.co.uk

Im not interested in comments on style or comments on my choice of Joomla as my CSM.

What I do want to know is; does what i've written make sence, and are there any typos.....I'm dyslexic so struggle abit to spot typos.

If there's anything that you dont 100% understand then I need to change the content because I want everyone to understand.

If any one has any tips in relation to using Joomla please feel free to let me know, i just dont want to get into a discussion on style or looks as I'm not advertising a web design company.

Any comments will be greatly recieved.

Thanks Simon
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Old 09-27-2010, 02:56 PM Re: Please help proof read my site
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One thing I really don't like is when a website offering a product or service includes Google ads in their design. I saw ads for SurveyMonkey as well as some other reporting ads. Why would you do that? How much money could those ads really be paying you? Leave that stuff for forums, blog pages, etc..

Instead, I think I would talk with SurveyMonkey about becoming an affiliate. Then I would offer your premium done-for-you service while promoting a do-it-yourself e-product for $49 or something coupled with a SurveyMonkey membership as a follow-up cheaper alternative.

Oh and you misspelled 'organi-z-ation'

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Old 09-27-2010, 03:41 PM Re: Please help proof read my site
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Hi Shadrach,

Do you know what, the more I look at the Google Ads the more they get on my nerves....so i've got rid of them.

I've never made a penny of them and only included them as I thought (being a newbie to SEO) that they improved my ranking.

So thanks for the tip.
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Old 09-27-2010, 03:43 PM Re: Please help proof read my site
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I've never made a penny of them
Just because you slapped Adsense on your site doesn't guarantee instantaneous earnings, it took me awhile before I started getting really good payments from them.
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Old 09-27-2010, 04:46 PM Re: Please help proof read my site
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Old 10-03-2010, 08:51 AM Re: Please help proof read my site
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proof read it, and all seems in order m8, congrats on the site
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Old 10-03-2010, 09:42 AM Re: Please help proof read my site
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Hey Chris I will try to make this post two lines : First of all, I'm not an editor, writer, publisher, spammer. I gave my honest opinion about the sites that I checked out, and answered the questions the people had asked. Second, you seem to do a lot of judging against what people post on here, some people are new to this and are only looking for a decent community to participate in. I moderate a forum as well, but you are taking this way too seriously, I'm not sure if you work an actual job or not, or leave your house much or not. I believe if you did you would not be so quick to play "god" in an online community, your letting your personality show through your moderation. Some people don't have the time to write out multiple, complex reviews for sites but at least I gave my opinion on the sites I actually took the time to visit. I notice you like to ban as well, don't bother, I will not be calling this community my home. Thanks to everyone else who actively and constructively participates. I know this reply was long, but I felt genuinely cheated by your lack of professional judgment to close my thread. Oh yeah, and I'm too busy to search for the proper place to post this thread, so apologies to the person whom actually initiated it. -X

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Old 10-03-2010, 02:26 PM Re: Please help proof read my site
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from the first page

image at top

"Using other people's..." (you're missing the apostrophe)

"Iter is able to offer a wide range of support solutions to organisations interested in social research and performance monitoring, **** our services range from ad hoc support, such as questionnaire design or advice on setting SMART target up to completing full-scale research projects."


i would starta a new sentence where i out ****

3rd para: "If used correctly data, ..." i would put a comma.

"But for us the most important thing about coaching you each step of the way if the level of confidence you develop in any results." should be "is the level of confidence... " ?!

this doesn't make sense
"We provide in surely have enough confidence in our work and be able to use any results."
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