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Old 11-15-2010, 07:22 AM Looking for Good feed back
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Hi Guys n Girls .

Review my site and give me some feed back .

what screen size u useing .

what IE

Hows Does the font size look

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Old 11-15-2010, 11:38 AM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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the template is pretty plain
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Old 11-15-2010, 11:50 AM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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any Suggestions

i did wanna keep the page load time down . but its just a base to start with
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Old 11-16-2010, 10:15 AM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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Atleast add come color to it, I would not buy a bike from there as I would be bored to death after 5 minutes on the page.
Put a width on the website about 960px
Put a bg color, you can keep the content color white.

style the links a bit.
Some very simple CSS would make your website much better
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Old 11-16-2010, 09:46 PM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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You should change the color your site little bit. I think it looks great, but actually not attractive to visitors.
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Old 11-17-2010, 02:25 AM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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your products- kid bikes show not many.
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Old 11-17-2010, 07:07 PM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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Site is taking entirely too long to load.

You will lose a lot of visitors if they have to wait so long for your site to load, they will just go somewhere else.
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Old 11-19-2010, 03:53 AM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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there are too many spaces between products. the product title is too long.
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Old 11-19-2010, 04:24 AM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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thanks all for your feed back .. there is much for me to work on i see
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Old 11-19-2010, 10:14 AM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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I would have the background as the yellow colour and the main div white. The product backgrounds won't look out of place then. Also if you are trying to get people to buy your bikes why would you advertise Halfords bikes?
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Old 11-19-2010, 11:23 AM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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It needs more structure. The page is generally very messy and lacking in a coherent structure. It also looks like a spam page.

I would consider the following:
  1. Lose the keyword stuffing at the top. That won't do you any good.
  2. Define your columns better. Either with different background colours or dividing lines.
  3. The products are laid out quite poorly. consider giving them more space, possibly boxing them. I would have perhaps only 2 per row instead of 3.
  4. Consider branding your site better. The logo is pretty weak (sci-fi typeface for a kids shop?) and the choices of colours are plain and uninteresting.

Seeing as it's a site for kids bikes, you could really make it visually much more appealing: think of all of the imagery associated with kids etc.

Hope this helps.
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Old 11-20-2010, 09:41 PM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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Simple first step - change the background colour. For example to the colour used in these posts.
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Old 11-21-2010, 01:11 AM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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You are not able to attarct my attention to any section of the webpage. As soon as I land on your webpage all looks same, messy, lack of structure. unable to to differentiate between the sections and i think blame somewhat the color combo as well.
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Old 11-21-2010, 03:55 AM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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very plain. the background is boring
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Old 11-23-2010, 11:07 PM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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it looks ok maybe you can put a white background for the center where the text is located. also divide your columns i see you have 3.
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Old 11-24-2010, 02:31 AM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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i like the style of your site.
But the overall of your site feel not very compact, a large number of blank on your home page.
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Old 11-25-2010, 06:24 PM Re: Looking for Good feed back
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thanks for all your feed back ..iv made a few changes
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