Website Review and Suggestions

**Digmen1** · 12-01-2010, 09:47 PM

Its home made, so its a bit amateurish

But please tell me what I did to do to make it more "sales worthy"
Another words what to do so that people realise that its a sales page and that they can order with confidence form me.

I would like to stick with the basic Paypal cart until I build up sales and can justify a full blown cart.

http://www.adovationz.co.nz/catalogww.htm

**Digmen1** · 12-02-2010, 09:19 PM

Any comments ?

**heat33** · 12-03-2010, 03:56 AM

If it is your first website then it is no bad.
the nave at the top does not stretch all the way across

**jimmywhite** · 12-03-2010, 06:27 AM

I think you're much better of with a decent cart, hosting is not that expensive and you can do so much more in terms of landing pages.

**Digmen1** · 12-03-2010, 08:17 PM

@Jimmy

Do you own those three sites ?
Or did you design them ?

**dagaul101** · 12-04-2010, 10:19 AM

Nice site, like the images of the coffee mug handles, nice use of colors

**edgray** · 12-04-2010, 11:09 AM

I love the product but the pages are terrible. No logo, no branding, no sales pitch, do cohesive layout structure.

You need to hire a designer I think.

**tahoecale** · 12-04-2010, 02:59 PM

i dont know how to put this with out you taking it the wrong way but you should just go and get a free website template and just use that intill you have more experience with website designing

**Digmen1** · 12-05-2010, 05:29 PM

Thanks guys

One of you likes my site, the rest don't

I agree with the rest of you, I realise it needs a design maker over.

I am not offended in any way.

But until I can afford a professional designer, I would appreciate any specific suggestions.

**chrisx17x2008** · 12-06-2010, 03:42 PM

i think the colors clash big time. and it just seems so blocky and doesnt flow.

**chrishirst** · 12-06-2010, 06:01 PM

That is NOT a landing page!

Background is too bright and masks what you are selling.
Too many words on the page.
Not enough contrast for the text
No call to action.

That just a soft sell catalogue page more suitable for website browsing or "organic search"

**chrisx17x2008** · 12-06-2010, 06:27 PM

are you ONLY using css for style aka no pics? If you photoshop you be suprised what some simple gradients and text designs can do even for a non-professional graphic designer

**vk2010** · 12-07-2010, 03:40 AM

it is a lovely site.
i think it looks like only finished half work.
there are only four cup.
the homepage only one half.
also not many landing page.

**nitromeaga** · 12-07-2010, 09:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Digmen1

Its nitrome home made, so its a bit amateurish

But please tell me what I did to do to make nitromes more "sales worthy"
Another agameswords what to do so that people realise that its a sales page and that they can order with agame confidence form me.

I would like to stick with the basic Paypal cart until I build up sales and can justify a full blown cart.

nice sales landing page . very interesting

**lucky2381** · 02-17-2011, 12:30 AM

Personally I don't think it is too bad. Colors do clash a bit. Try centering horizontally. In chrome, it is pushed to the left. The navigation at the top should stretch the full width of your page. (There is a small white section on the right of the nav that stands out.)

I don't see anything wrong with using paypal until sales come in. Overall, I think it is an ok design, with the mentioned fixes I would rate it a 6.5-7

**hendrizius** · 02-19-2011, 12:03 PM

I like these 2 things..

like the images of the coffee mug handles, nice use of colors

**nashir** · 02-25-2011, 02:02 AM

Nice landing page. You can improve bg color.

**LisaJones** · 02-25-2011, 08:34 AM

Looks like a design made by a 10 year old kid who got his first computer.
The color scheme doesn't appeal to the message your site should bring.
You offer coffee holders - use "coffee colors" then...

**TechArt_1117** · 02-27-2011, 07:38 PM

I'm using firefox, and its not centered. So it looks very misplaced. Other then that it looks pretty decent.

**Nanaa** · 02-27-2011, 10:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TechArt_1117

I'm using firefox, and its not centered. So it looks very misplaced. Other then that it looks pretty decent.

yes , i agree and more texts are so boring .