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Old 12-07-2010, 12:58 AM Please Review my Site, I need suggestions
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Hi,

I found that there are many SEO experts over here. So I thought to take valuable suggestions from you guys. I am very much confused with my website ranking.

Its a limousine service provider website (http://www.torontoairportlimoflatrate.com)

Continuous off-page and on-page optimization is being done on daily basis. But ranking is paused to 2nd page of Google with many of targeted keywords.

I am unable to find the exact reason that why my ranking is not shifting from page 2 to page 1 (site appears on 2nd page of Google with many keywords..And it is stuck there for a long time).

Please give your reviews so that I may improve my ranking.

Thanks in advance.
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Old 12-07-2010, 03:29 AM Re: Please Review my Site, I need suggestions
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The content is too little, too many link below your site.
i think it is a website, it is just a piece of article.
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Old 12-09-2010, 04:28 PM Re: Please Review my Site, I need suggestions
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Copy is atrocious (sorry but it is). "We maintain to effectively place the benchmark of superiority in the ground transportation industry " -- WTH? Layout's poor -- navigation options at the top are lost. Overuse of some keywords will annoy search engines. Example: "Our Guelph Limousine Service contains an unbelievable fleet of limousines " - how about "Guelph offers luxury cars and limousines"
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Old 12-09-2010, 06:18 PM Re: Please Review my Site, I need suggestions
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http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=ht...Inline&group=0

11 Errors

Owww..

I love all those

Code:
<td>&nbsp;</td>
And I also love the

Code:
onclick="MM_jumpMenuGo('jumpMenu','parent',0)"
Bad "design", tables used for site layout, bad coded (DreamWeaver used), no layout at all, no structure...

#fail

Sorry, but a site that wants to "sell" limousine services needs to be attractive, fresh, cool...

Look at your header logo, the car at the right... does a car looks like that?

No, ofcourse not... get someone to do that job correctly

Oh by the way: your "disable right click" javascript... delete it, looks unprofessional.

If we want to see your sourcecode, it is no problem at all to get it. I do not even need right mouse click

-> Bots do not like bad code or tables used for site's layout, they like W3C valid code and CSS
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Old 12-09-2010, 11:32 PM Re: Please Review my Site, I need suggestions
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I'm no a pro or even an amateur.
The feel I get from your site is that English is not your first language and you have a number of grammar problems.
I'm not sure a black and white photo of a limo would compel me to hire your service.
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