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A Wholesale Website With a Twist. Please Review!
Old 01-02-2011, 08:12 PM A Wholesale Website With a Twist. Please Review!
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I just put together this new website. We are a wholesaler that helps people start a home business selling our products (glass pipes, bubblers, waterpipes) on craigslist. Is the purpose of the site clear and is the sales page compelling?

You can log in and see the forums and members pages if youd like. You can use the email Skyboundlove@gmail.com and the password gg252535gg

Any suggestions on how to improve the site are very much appreciated!

I dont have a real domain yet but I will soon, for now its:

www.QuietFlightGlass.webs.com

Thanks!

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Old 01-03-2011, 08:04 AM Re: A Wholesale Website With a Twist. Please Review!
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There's a much-quoted stat that 60% of visitors won't scroll -- all your info is below the fold.
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Old 01-03-2011, 09:55 AM Re: A Wholesale Website With a Twist. Please Review!
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Strange products

I would recommend smaller header height, centering the advert placed in the top left, and you could alter the style of faecbook link since it gets an underline when it's being hovered.
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Old 01-31-2011, 01:09 AM Re: A Wholesale Website With a Twist. Please Review!
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Thats for the feedback everyone, I tryed to fix everything you guys said. For starters I made the header much smaller so that it only shows the colors fading out around "Quiet Flight Glass" and not the whole rainbow thing. I also made the call to action much larger and I moved it up so now you should be able to read everything and see the call to action without scrolling down.

Iv also finished the business plan that ill be giving to people who want to become distributors. Its about 7 pages and I think its pretty well done, if anyone would like to read over that and learn a little about selling pipes PM me and you can see it and just let me know what you think.

Later today im going to buy the domain www.QuietFlightGlass.com and ill also get rid of that dumb add at the top so ill be ready for business! Now i just need some business... haha. Iv been posting with a link in my sig on blackhatworld thinking those are the people that i want to reach. Anyone have any other suggestions? Iv got a small budget to play with.

Thanks again to everyone who already posted!
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Old 02-01-2011, 10:03 PM Re: A Wholesale Website With a Twist. Please Review!
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Are those sex toys?
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