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Old 12-13-2010, 10:34 AM Web Dev Noobie-My first blog
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my first blog is about web devlopment, the idea is to teach fellow noobies what I just learned coming strait from someone who has their same point of view..I wanted it to be live while it had errors so at one point when its pixel perfect to go back and see how far I've come and share it with all my visitors..I'm really new I've only been doing this a few months but I just want to get an idea of how I'm doing? Is my content easy to understand for other noobs..do I even know what I'm talking about? how is the design? the logo? the load time? thanks looking forward to hearing some comments I know I got a lot of work to do!

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Old 12-16-2010, 08:23 AM Re: Web Dev Noobie-My first blog
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Old 12-19-2010, 06:13 AM Re: Web Dev Noobie-My first blog
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Just had a quick look at the home page: two things would turn me off immediately -- (a) there's a spelling mistake in the first heading (and other errors in first paragraph) -- my general feeling is that if you can't be bothered to spellcheck and grammar check, I won't read on. Harsh, but many feel that way. (b) Second heading uses terms that are too specific -- if I was a novice I'd want to see something like "CSS For Beginners" -- I might not understand this is the way that the system presents the page, try numbering that category of blog - "Basic CSS (lesson 10): Ids ...". Friendlier to reader and to search engines. Also, present a highly visible link at the top of the sidebar to lesson 1. And you've left the more comment off the second blog on the page. Quibbles aside, lots of good info there, promising start.
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Old 12-21-2010, 07:11 PM Re: Web Dev Noobie-My first blog
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good idea on the basic css(lesson) I think i'm going to apply that right away, but what is the spelling or grammar error? on what post? and thanks for taking time out to read my content I appreciate the feed back
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Old 12-23-2010, 07:39 AM Re: Web Dev Noobie-My first blog
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Good enough if it's your first blog, here are several suggestions,
1) the font of the right links including recent posts and archives are too small
2) lines in the content are overlaped.
3) too fewer colors, not very fashion

(I'm using firefox)
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Old 12-30-2010, 02:02 PM Re: Web Dev Noobie-My first blog
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Old 12-31-2010, 09:02 AM Re: Web Dev Noobie-My first blog
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whats favicon?

I might be the worst at choosing color schemes kno any good articles I could read to get better at it? or could you recommend some that'll go good?
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Old 12-31-2010, 03:06 PM Re: Web Dev Noobie-My first blog
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FAVourites ICON - the little image by a bookmark: http://www.favicon.co.uk/ See http://www.webdesignfromscratch.com/web-design/colour/ and similar sites for colour infol
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Old 12-31-2010, 08:02 PM Re: Web Dev Noobie-My first blog
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Hi NoeG,

Good content and colors BUT I have to go along with skywind You need a little color maybe a image or two would be nice.

Plus to me the header is to tall look how much nicer the header is here with my browser " Fire Fox" it's about 1 inch high now look at yours it's almost 3 inches of blank space.

I never used word press but If you have a hosting account you can get into the code and change that.

Sorry if this seems to critical because it's not meant to be BUT I think of it as web art as much a web design

But that's just me
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Old 01-03-2011, 12:47 PM Re: Web Dev Noobie-My first blog
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ohh lol ok yea I'm working on a revised version of the website its off line on a wamp server but the new version will be online soon and I've added those fav icons..I've made alot of changes maybe we could get new reviews once I update the website to the newer cleaner version..I personally think I'm fixing all the little flaws but we'll see
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Old 02-28-2011, 06:55 PM Please review the new templafied.com
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Old 02-28-2011, 07:42 PM Please review the new templafied.com
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Hey all its been a few months since my site has been reviewed..Back then it was a blog now its a theme website were I hope to share the works I create for free! I know I'm still a beginner and the site is no easy task for someone just starting to do alone but I gave it my best and I'm seeking critisism..

Does it look at least legitimate? remember go easy on me I haven't been doing this long and I'm not claiming to even be good at this

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Old 03-01-2011, 06:24 AM Re: Please review the new templafied.com
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Under Features this template includes all the images are missing.
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Old 03-11-2011, 04:59 PM Re: Web Dev Noobie-My first blog
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Improve the font or You can also use a premium theme.
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Old 03-14-2011, 01:32 AM Re: Please review the new templafied.com
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Clean interface just fix the problem with the images under features and you should be fine!

Great work!
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Old 03-17-2011, 06:49 AM Re: Please review the new templafied.com
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Hi Noeg,
The template is good but we can get a full idea when you have the real content. The design and its appearance will depends on the content too. Once you place the content even you will get an idea is it suits your domain.
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Old 03-17-2011, 07:06 AM Re: Please review the new templafied.com
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