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Old 06-12-2011, 01:28 PM Review overall website
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hi, please could you review and give me ideas on how i could improve this website i designed for a client. the link is raisetheyouth.co.uk

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Old 06-12-2011, 07:02 PM Re: Review overall website
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Really like you site, clean and attractive desgin. I like the fresh colours used on the site.

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Old 06-12-2011, 08:26 PM Re: Review overall website
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The theme looks nice for what you're trying to promote. But, you should remove the white space from this screen shot :



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Old 06-15-2011, 04:10 PM Re: Review overall website
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thanks for your feed back. i thnk your right about removing the white space, or i may reduce the size to around 2px, ill see what looks best.

keep them coming please

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Old 06-17-2011, 08:12 AM Re: Review overall website
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Top header bar should be improved.
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Old 06-18-2011, 07:16 AM Re: Review overall website
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Looks nice n clean .. you might have a worrie about the page load up time .
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Old 06-20-2011, 11:14 AM Re: Review overall website
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Top header bar should be improved.
how do you think it would it be improved, and what bar? thanks
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Old 06-20-2011, 11:17 AM Re: Review overall website
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Looks nice n clean .. you might have a worrie about the page load up time .
thanks, and im working on optimizing all the images to make the file size as low as possible, ive already reduced the website load time by about 700%.

please could you all tell me how long it took the site to load.

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Old 06-22-2011, 07:50 PM Re: Review overall website
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Hi, nice site! Do you What you accidentally make it color full? And I think the "support us, who we are, and contact us" section is better if you make it align left, it will look neat
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Old 06-23-2011, 01:27 AM Re: Review overall website
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Looks Great and meaningful design for your domain name, especially the footer. I like that video say "Dream", "Imagination" and so on.
As above said, i too want you to remove the white spaces in footer.
No negative points other than that from me.
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Old 06-23-2011, 05:50 PM Re: Review overall website
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Hi, nice site! Do you What you accidentally make it color full? And I think the "support us, who we are, and contact us" section is better if you make it align left, it will look neat
hi, thanks for the feedback. i don't understand what you mean by "Do you What you accidentally make it color full?" and noted your point about the alignment of the text in the footer. ill take a look what it looks like left aligned. thanks a lot
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Old 06-23-2011, 05:52 PM Re: Review overall website
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Looks Great and meaningful design for your domain name, especially the footer. I like that video say "Dream", "Imagination" and so on.
As above said, i too want you to remove the white spaces in footer.
No negative points other than that from me.
thanks a lot . and yeah ill probably remove the white space from the footer

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Old 06-24-2011, 09:11 AM Re: Review overall website
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I really like the "go!" style of the site but I would have to agree that the header is kind of eye straining.
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Old 06-27-2011, 10:58 AM Re: Review overall website
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Please take this constructively.
I'm not sure how much design freedom you had in this
but I think it needs a lot of improvement.

- You need a favicon
- You need better SEO on your title tags
- You need a call to action
- You need some kind of a slogan or tag line in the header (think of
it as your elevator pitch for what the organization actually does)

- Lose the first YouTube Video. It's meaningless. It's just a
bunch of words that dont actually communicate anything useful
AND takes up a bunch of valuable screen real estate above the fold.

- Lose the second YouTube Video. I find it quite creepy.
AND some of the narration is alienating "...sustainable outcomes that
create better life chances to become adult citizens who positively participate in their communities..."

Do people actually ever talk like that?

- Lose the Facebook iframe or at least minimize it. Sticking iframes in your site always looks
like a lazy design option.

- Check your text/background contrast on the side menu in roll over mode. I can't read the text sometimes.
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Old 06-28-2011, 08:02 AM Re: Review overall website
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I really like the "go!" style of the site but I would have to agree that the header is kind of eye straining.
in what way is the header eye straining. please could you provide me with more detail

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Old 06-28-2011, 08:17 AM Re: Review overall website
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Please take this constructively.
I'm not sure how much design freedom you had in this
but I think it needs a lot of improvement.

- You need a favicon
- You need better SEO on your title tags
- You need a call to action
- You need some kind of a slogan or tag line in the header (think of
it as your elevator pitch for what the organization actually does)

- Lose the first YouTube Video. It's meaningless. It's just a
bunch of words that dont actually communicate anything useful
AND takes up a bunch of valuable screen real estate above the fold.

- Lose the second YouTube Video. I find it quite creepy.
AND some of the narration is alienating "...sustainable outcomes that
create better life chances to become adult citizens who positively participate in their communities..."

Do people actually ever talk like that?

- Lose the Facebook iframe or at least minimize it. Sticking iframes in your site always looks
like a lazy design option.

- Check your text/background contrast on the side menu in roll over mode. I can't read the text sometimes.
thanks a lot for the feedback. your right it needs a favicon and ive not done any seo work on the site yet, that's the next job.

the first video contains the keywords related to the company and the second an intro about the company. both of which i have no choice to remove the directors love them and wanted them to be on the homepage. im going to speak to the director to see if the script of the intro video can be made more user friendly.

the facebook plugin is a usefull tool to not a lazy option in my opinion.

thanks, flex
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Old 06-30-2011, 07:12 PM Re: Review overall website
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The design looks nice, in my opinion website overall 8.5/10
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Old 07-01-2011, 01:32 AM Re: Review overall website
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The design looks nice, in my opinion website overall 8.5/10
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Old 07-27-2011, 01:47 AM Re: Review overall website
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reviews are still needed and appreciated, thanks
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Old 07-27-2011, 04:19 AM Re: Review overall website
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rather than youth it looks like it's aimed at 3-7 year olds with the primary colours and gel buttons

a sky blue would like nicer at the top..

basically i think the whole site should follow the simplicity and colour scheme of the footer and would start again

lots of code errors including missing alt attributes

these are all synonymous:
Our Values
Our Vision
Our Aims
Our Mission
Our approaches

i would aim for plain english rather than some of that think-out-the-box business speak
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