Website Review and Suggestions

**kralcx** · 07-13-2011, 09:05 PM

I need your review of my page www.hiygin.com/herbalfiberblend/herbalfiberblend.html

It's a simple page; my goal is to get visitors to click on the button (link)

I've checked this in various browsers IE,FF,Chrome, Safari, Win and Mac. If anyone could check this in Opera 10 or older that would be great! Everything validated except for line 56, however it validates in Dreamweaver, (in any event I don't know what the problem is?)

Any advice is appreciated. B)

**NullPointer** · 07-13-2011, 10:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kralcx

Everything validated except for line 56, however it validates in Dreamweaver, (in any event I don't know what the problem is?)

This is linke 56:

Code:

<a href="http://www.theaimcompanies.com/products/herbal_fiberblend/powder_and_capsules.aspx?prodcode=3217E&amp;lid=168&amp;AIM_AXOwnerID=628037&amp;aimstore=y" id="button" title="Try Herbal Fiberblend Today!" /><span></span></a>

You're using a self closing tag ( <a ... /> ). Remove the / and it will validate.

**TWD** · 07-14-2011, 10:43 AM

Looks very basic and not so attractive.
For a start look at better color co-ordination and
then think about a proper font scheme.

**SiberForum** · 07-14-2011, 11:21 AM

What to say... just another advertising page, even nothing to review.

**kralcx** · 07-14-2011, 05:27 PM

Nullpointer it turns out it was the / after the Fiberblend Today!" not the a tag.

TWD any pointers on how to choose proper fonts?

Thanks

**TWD** · 07-14-2011, 08:36 PM

First step would be to plan your information heirachy and scale accordingly.
e.g.
H1 48 px
H2 36 px
H3 24 px
P 16 px

Then decide how to style each level (font family, regular or italic, color [dont go overboard!], underline or not, CSS word spacing, CSS letter spacing etc)

This may help:
http://www.typetester.org/

**logoonlinepros** · 07-15-2011, 04:16 AM

Hmmm not look like a professional site try to put some content on your site.

**kralcx** · 07-15-2011, 12:29 PM

TWD thanks for the info and the link

**Digital Friend** · 09:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kralcx

It's a simple page; my goal is to get visitors to click on the button (link)

If it was the "try it today" button, then I would have never found it. The only reason why I've noticed it, was because I was searching for it,

.

Here's my suggestion to change around the structure of your page : ( no scale )

As you can see, the content that describes the product is first, so if the reader is interested in the product, they'll scroll down and find the ad/link,

Edited : Increase the size of the "try it today" button once/if you restructure the page.

**iwebdeveloper** · 07-17-2011, 01:47 AM

Please Try Color Combination and also size and add some design in your website.
Thanks.

**kralcx** · 07-17-2011, 04:40 PM

thanks DigitalFriend for the suggestions. I am going to change my h1...h3 tags and redo the button

**loverboy420** · 07-24-2011, 11:47 AM

Unattractive.. There was nothing that caught my eyes. I was just looking around to see what should i read on the site? All messed up..

Sorry, but don't like it, you need to improve it.

**flexdesigns** · 07-30-2011, 10:19 AM

its really ugly in my opinion. theres no navigation, no colour scheme, no design, the only thing i like is the social icons which i presume you didn't create

thanks

**neelhaam** · 08-08-2011, 08:07 AM

Don't use only ads & selling product single page.

Make a minimum 5 page with content & tell visitor about your service what you going to sale. Make your self open to all.

If you hide your self visitor don't believe you wit your product.

**DBStudios1** · 08-10-2011, 07:52 PM

at a glance, I think it comes across as a ad. If you want to sell products you may consider buying a template then working on a pre-built design