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Old 08-18-2011, 03:33 AM Review my first web project
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Hi everyone. Its my first website made in English, cause i am from Ukraine.
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Give me some advices, thanks!
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Old 08-18-2011, 09:54 AM Re: Review my first web project
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Great effort for your first Internationalized site.

I think there might be a little too much content on the landing page though.
Trim it down a bit and create a bit more white space (black space?) and it should be much better.

Also, you have a few W3C I18n errors.
Check this report:
http://validator.w3.org/i18n-checker...lidate-by-uri+
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Old 08-18-2011, 11:45 AM Re: Review my first web project
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TWD thx, site still creating, many functions doesnt work.
Ok, i will correct the errors in code.
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Old 08-21-2011, 03:01 PM Re: Review my first web project
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Overall the website looks nice and it does have a good mix of dark and red colors. I would probably use some more graphics, but as it is now, it is ok
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Old 08-25-2011, 10:13 AM Re: Review my first web project
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Gaby111 ok, i will think about chanhing design on site.
What colours you can recommend?
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Old 08-26-2011, 03:20 PM Re: Review my first web project
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i think you should try and simplify it, maybe use less thumbnails but increase their size, lighten the whole thing up a little. and when i go onto the homepage i done know where to look as theres too much content

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Old 08-27-2011, 05:52 PM Re: Review my first web project
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flexdesigns thx I'll think about it
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Old 08-27-2011, 09:05 PM Re: Review my first web project
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Great job on the site site, But it is very busy, you want to keep it very simple and easy to navigate. Colors are nice you want to show like 5-6 cars for a section with a button to see more, in the used and new section.
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Old 09-01-2011, 04:20 PM Re: Review my first web project
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Bizzoyce thx.
The main page is now more simple, check it please ^_^
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Old 09-08-2011, 02:29 PM Re: Review my first web project
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yea i think there is a lot of content on the homepage. can you add a search bar so that that frontpage looks a little less congested?
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Old 09-08-2011, 11:38 PM Re: Review my first web project
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I like the red/brown, blue, black background and main banner looks good. Busy index but I don't feel that it's very crowded.

Maybe just continue editing the footer; I see 3 feedback links.

Overall, the site looks great.
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Old 09-10-2011, 02:51 AM Re: Review my first web project
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Shey Thank you. I forgot about footer i ll edit it now.
chrisv24 ok.
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Old 11-14-2011, 11:01 PM Re: Review my first web project
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If it is actually your first web project, then it is outstanding. You definitely have the guts to become a first-class web designer.

Wish you good luck.
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Old 11-26-2011, 02:48 AM Re: Review my first web project
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I like the background image, gradients, and the layout works great for a car site

easy to use navigation, nice work
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Old 12-05-2011, 10:40 PM Re: Review my first web project
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I think that you could benefit from taking some content off of the page. It is very congested and there are a lot of distractions. Maybe have some text describing what makes your site better than others, and about 50% less images. That would make it much more readable, in my opinion.

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Old 12-05-2011, 11:32 PM Re: Review my first web project
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there seams to be alot of content on the landing page... if you want to keep it all there.. I would make your pictures larger and add spaces between them..there is alot for the eye to catch at first glance...I would say if you want to go with black background maybe use an orange or red instead of the white for your text... im not sure how it would look but for my eyes the white aches them a bit.. HTH.. good luck to you!!
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Old 12-09-2011, 04:06 PM Re: Review my first web project
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Very good design about cars. I like the color cobination, styles and images that are used. May be you should make it in different languages and to reduce the number of images on the index page ... that's all my critics! The rest I like very much!
I would be also glad if you sign up your website at my free website catalogue!
Best wishes and good luck,
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P.S. Сайт действительно очень классный
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Old 12-11-2011, 02:11 PM Re: Review my first web project
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I agree that the home page may look a little over-crowded. Some people may be put off with too much stuff to look at or be confused as to where to go next.

Good work though mate!
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Old 12-18-2011, 01:29 PM Re: Review my first web project
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I like teh apperance and the loading times semm quite good
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