No need for a screenshot, I was mistaken. the reason it looks bad is not the font choice it's the font-background combo. black on grey is what's doing it. It's looking amateurish. I totally assumed that the font was just different and possibly some sneakily not sans-enough font, but it wasn't.
Sorry. I have to be careful about what I assume is the problem. Why don't you test the about page and the welcome text in white-font on blue background. Just to get an idea if that changes it. Makes it feel more crisp and professional. At the moment it feels a little bit blurry. I am tempted (which is rare for me, VERY rare) to assert the notion that there may be too much text. Too wordy. Maybe. Maybe it's the clunk which is making it look bad. Something about it means that even just typing live into this textarea at the bottom of this page is a more professional-looking screen than when I flip to the tab with your page...
Or try black on white, traditional,. and make the border grey instead of white. On the welcome text. And if that works, repeat for about page.
yeah. look at this. this is **** hot. i dug it up on the goog in about a nanosecond
http://www.clarewebdesign.co.uk/home
it's obscenely good
I've bookmarked it, it's that good. You just saw 100% successful web-design in action.
Her fonts: white on black. Just my style.
How could you compete with that? Doesn't the wealth that site generates make you hungry to be as good as they are? I'm sure you could transform your page to be as good in a single day.
Indeed I needed to hijack a spare tab to look at clarewebdesign again, so keen was I to check it again and enjoy its beauty and be sure I want to pay them money some time, that I chose the tab with YOUR site on it, to lose... that's the point. It's a competitive place this and when designing you need maximum quality everything - looks and brains. It all counts.
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