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Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
Old 12-30-2011, 09:22 AM Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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Hi,

Please could you take a few minute and have a quick look at the layout / design i have done.
Currently their is no content and the GRAPHICS ARE TO CHANGE (including logo).

Layout and colours, please.

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Old 12-30-2011, 10:21 AM re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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text is waaaay too small

the background green is a bit cold/sick maybe reduce the saturation a little to make it more sage like
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Old 12-30-2011, 12:35 PM re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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For me the layout is fine, but the background color brown and and pale blue or green doesn't look pleasing. You mentioned the logo and graphics will change, that's good.

I can read the text but I also would mention to increase the size of the text.
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Old 12-30-2011, 12:38 PM re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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well of course i *can* read the text - i have excellent vision but it
s not comfortable
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Old 12-30-2011, 01:06 PM re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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My thoughts were on people who have vision problems, this doesn't apply to the senior community only. The other day I seen what appeared to be a 5 year old child with very strong glasses, so young, my heart went out to the little one.

Well I did read the text with a pair of weak glasses, so there!
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Old 12-30-2011, 05:18 PM re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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Great feedback guys, thanks.

I have made the text slightly bigger now (a whole 1px!). I wanted the background colour to sort of match an outdoor feel, considering it's mainly a Personal Training Business, or do you think something other would suit?

again, brand and logo design still to come, but the layout is OK? understandable? easy to use etc... ?

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Old 12-30-2011, 06:07 PM re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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Old 12-31-2011, 12:19 AM Re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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Great feedback guys, thanks.

I have made the text slightly bigger now (a whole 1px!). I wanted the background colour to sort of match an outdoor feel, considering it's mainly a Personal Training Business, or do you think something other would suit?

again, brand and logo design still to come, but the layout is OK? understandable? easy to use etc... ?

Thanks,
Happy new year too!
Okay, the text is a little better.

The layout is all right for me now and understandable, but that could change also when you introduce new graphics, logo, colors. You are trying for earth tone colors, I have some links for you on the sage color which could help you.

Sage Green This color chart shows some nice browns to go with the sage.

Colors that go with Sage In the "Search Combo Library" type in sage.

#d8e0ce color hex
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Old 12-31-2011, 02:48 AM Re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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text is too small. still, by a lot. aim for 14-16 px. as an example look at the size of the text on this forum


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Old 12-31-2011, 07:03 AM Re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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no im sorry i really didnt like it......and you could do a little better......not saying that to bring you down but to help you be more successful......
Thanks for that, you're not bringing me down don't worry but... That's not very constructive is it?
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Old 12-31-2011, 12:06 PM Re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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Okay, the text is a little better.

The layout is all right for me now and understandable, but that could change also when you introduce new graphics, logo, colors. You are trying for earth tone colors, I have some links for you on the sage color which could help you.

Sage Green This color chart shows some nice browns to go with the sage.

Colors that go with Sage In the "Search Combo Library" type in sage.

#d8e0ce color hex
Great, thanks. Text has been enlarged (see www.activityx.co.uk/new) and I have played with the colours, any better?
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Old 12-31-2011, 12:35 PM Re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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Old 12-31-2011, 01:01 PM Re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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A very slight improvement, at first using your link, the website looked the same as before, until I compared Davemies graphic to the your new website changes.
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Old 01-07-2012, 06:03 AM Re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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What I would improve and change:
1) Logo - there is a starnge backround color of the logo. I would just remove it!
2) Recent news, I would make the font-size bigger a little bit
3) I would remove that image between the main content and main buttons!
I like The other things like colors, structure and layouts and wish you good luck,
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Old 01-10-2012, 02:49 AM Re: Please review website design/layout: www.activityx.co.uk/new
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Hey! The design is super cool. I was just wondering how would it look if you put in slight shadows or maybe bars between different sections. The page right now looks all blended. I guess you understand what I am trying to say here. And to me it seems as if the text under What is Activity-X? has a line height real high.

Apart from this, the website is super cool.
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