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Review: Chor Vang (Personal Site)
Old 01-08-2012, 03:59 AM Review: Chor Vang (Personal Site)
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would like to get some feedback on a personal website i have been working on.


any comments welcomed

thanks!

http://chorvang.com/

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Old 01-08-2012, 03:34 PM Re: Review: Chor Vang (Personal Site)
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why are the titles in english but the content in another language? I believe the general idea is health.. I love health pages, especially when they are geared around natural health. I dont like the color set up of the page tho.. its to blah and boring.. i hope i helped a little
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Old 01-08-2012, 06:34 PM Re: Review: Chor Vang (Personal Site)
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yes it is too boring, i will be doing something to the background..

it's not in a foriegn language it's lorem ipsum (dummy text) to fill up the area.http://www.lipsum.com/

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Old 01-10-2012, 02:51 AM Re: Review: Chor Vang (Personal Site)
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The image 2 and 3 were great. I really liked them. The only thing that I think needs improvement is that the word "Chor Vang" is blending with the background. Add some glow or shadow to the font or image, whatever you're using there to make it look stand out in the header and the rest of it is just great.
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Old 01-11-2012, 03:01 AM Re: Review: Chor Vang (Personal Site)
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Excellent use of textures.
I love the pixel perfect navigation.
Nice overall feel.

I don't like how the person is transparent/fading. Make him solid cut out. I know the picture is not wide enough but just Photoshop the shoulder there

The white headline is hard to read.
On 4 I don't like how he's in the sky. I'd think he's dead... I don't know maybe it's just me But I do like the way background fades to nothing.

Good typography on the posts.
Maybe the "read more" doesn't need the drop shadow around the box.
Just my 2 cents
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Old 02-14-2012, 10:36 AM Re: Review: Chor Vang (Personal Site)
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hello design is good, try to put you twitter/faceboook/google plus account link in/alongside/with the header.

the footer seems to be a little too long in size
and start posting.
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Old 02-14-2012, 12:51 PM Re: Review: Chor Vang (Personal Site)
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very clean website with easy nivigation. good job
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Old 02-14-2012, 02:35 PM Re: Review: Chor Vang (Personal Site)
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Would probably cut the header image in half -- takes up almost 1/3 of a laptop screen alone. Ensure to use more descriptive TITLE as well; but if looks you're off to a good start.
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Old 02-15-2012, 05:27 AM Re: Review: Chor Vang (Personal Site)
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Nice website with attractive colors and layouts. It is well designed and structured with informative content! I like it!
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Old 02-16-2012, 07:51 PM Re: Review: Chor Vang (Personal Site)
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thanks everybody. i put down the mockups and im early into the developing process so everything isn't completed yet.

thanks everybody for the reviews!
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