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Old 08-08-2005, 12:17 AM personal site
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This may be a re-post but last time i timed out when trying to post.

I made this site yesterday and today for my WWW Apps final. Just wanted to see what people think. I'll probably end up hosting it later when i can afford a host.

http://hagan.brownzilla.com/myOwn/
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Old 08-08-2005, 12:28 PM
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Hi,

It's not a bad design, but I don't much like the colour of your background image, and I find each page takes a surprisingly long time to load, sometimes leaving me wondering whether the link I clicked actually works.

I'd also reccommend that you provide a non-Flash version of the site, unless you are quite sure that you don't need to worry about members of your audience who prefer to avoid it.

Good luck!
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Old 08-08-2005, 01:45 PM
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It looks pretty good. I mean the overall layout is good, but it's awfully dark. Do you like green? I think if you wanted this to be compared to a "resume" type site then you might consider brighter colors. The navigation is easy and the page loaded quick.

I also agree with Oolong about having an html and flash version.

Might also consider a more legible font. Even though the one you are using is pretty, it could be difficult for some people to read it.

Good job though, keep up the good work!
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Old 08-08-2005, 03:10 PM
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8.0 Excellent website - all expectations met.

although, what is the purpose of this website? .. is it a "PORTFOLIO" site, showing your works?

Got to say though, well designed website, i like the transitions between content. Also your "Knowledge Base" is good, you sound like you know allot.
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Old 08-08-2005, 03:48 PM
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For right now its just a site i threw together for a final exam in my class. I plan on someday having it like a "portfolio" site, but i would have to make some revisions.

thx for the comments
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Old 08-09-2005, 08:19 AM
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Hi,

First thing I noticed was the time it took to load the initial flash,

I like the layout and it's quite well coded - the green doesn't fit however.

I love the HTML tickertape on the back, very fitting.

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Old 08-09-2005, 09:44 AM
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hi there!

just to say, also loved the tickertape on the back. but the green... maybe a little dark... but that's just me!
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Old 08-10-2005, 09:58 AM
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Definitely gotta like the whole Flash interface. I could never pull that off
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Old 08-11-2005, 06:21 AM
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Nice flash i like the letters on the background allot really nice design
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Old 08-17-2005, 02:48 PM
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Hi ^_^
Not a bad design, but the layout looks sort of "out of place" how the page is set up on the black. Instead of using the black background try using a green/black gradient or something and Putting a drop shadow on the rectangle layout. Might give it a kick, know what i mean?
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Old 08-18-2005, 11:06 AM
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I like it - I like the tickertape. Its a personal site so a place to be a little different & indulgent so if you like the colours then great. I like the use of iframe to contain text on the right & the occasional use of additional graphics overlaid on the original flash.
Yes the flash took time to load initially but hey u just wait don't u.
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Old 08-18-2005, 11:11 AM
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Can't say I can see the tickertape, but the design is sound.

One thing I would suggest would be to get rid of the bright white text and comments box at the bottom (possibly give comments it's own section?) and move the flash movie to the center of the page.
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Old 08-18-2005, 04:19 PM
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Not a bad idea, just poorly executed in my opinion. The colors need to flow more, have a more simplistic professional design would have been my choice
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Old 08-19-2005, 10:56 AM
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i give you 8 points from 10.
the design is good but i dont like dark green.
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Old 08-20-2005, 07:24 PM
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fix the scheme color 7/10. yea the dark green needs to be changed
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